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Modeling Images - Tessa

Postby Cre8tivepixels on Wed Nov 28, 2007 5:00 pm

D E A D midday shoot and by myself so controlling the harsh sunlight wasn't easy...experimented with some tones/filters as well....

Thanks for looking

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Postby Raskill on Wed Nov 28, 2007 5:53 pm

The lighting and tones in number three are fantastic. Excellent. I'm sure your model was stoked also!!
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Postby Poon on Wed Nov 28, 2007 5:57 pm

It is beautiful indeed.
Love it.
I thought it is from Wendell.
Well done Dan.
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Postby Cre8tivepixels on Wed Nov 28, 2007 6:06 pm

Poon wrote:I thought it is from Wendell.


Lol Wendell wouldn't do work this 'crap' lol

Thanks guys for the comments :)
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Postby Glen on Wed Nov 28, 2007 6:59 pm

Nice work Dan, especially on the last with hair flying, works very well.
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Postby Handlebars on Wed Nov 28, 2007 7:05 pm

#1 and #3 do it for me, love the ( *cough* ) colour in both :shock: :lol:
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Postby Paul on Wed Nov 28, 2007 7:25 pm

Nice work Dan but there's something disturbing with the bright whiteness of the eyes in the 2nd image.
It makes her look like a Gould from Stargate.
I really like the last shot with blue/cyan cast but again tone down the bright whites. 8)
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Postby Cre8tivepixels on Wed Nov 28, 2007 10:29 pm

Paul wrote:Nice work Dan but there's something disturbing with the bright whiteness of the eyes in the 2nd image.
It makes her look like a Gould from Stargate.
I really like the last shot with blue/cyan cast but again tone down the bright whites. 8)

Yup i went to hard on the old 'dodge' there :(
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Postby Onyx on Thu Nov 29, 2007 2:26 pm

Sorry I'm not all praise Dan. I'm seeing differing skintones on all four images with no consistency. Without the model in real life to reference, I don't know what it should be.
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Postby Cre8tivepixels on Thu Nov 29, 2007 5:28 pm

Onyx wrote:Sorry I'm not all praise Dan. I'm seeing differing skintones on all four images with no consistency. Without the model in real life to reference, I don't know what it should be.


And all 'intentionally' have different skintones, i was trying out different tints/tones etc as my post says.....its ok, you don't have to be sorry, i am not after praise......For what its worth the first is closest to the models skintones...cheers :)
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Postby Bandit on Thu Nov 29, 2007 11:40 pm

I like number 2... the eyes make it a bit extra terrestrial :)
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Postby viper1968 on Mon Dec 03, 2007 6:55 pm

I like # 3 and #4. Excellent work.
Especially like the tile colour and how is sets of the white clothing.
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