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Postby Pa on Tue Dec 04, 2007 2:57 pm

i normally don't post these....i'm interested in your thoughts.....thanks.

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Postby PiroStitch on Tue Dec 04, 2007 3:42 pm

Nice and casual poses, however the white balance seems to be a bit too warm.
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Postby Marvin on Tue Dec 04, 2007 7:36 pm

What a cute girl! I think the third is the best - the first two have gorgeous smiles but she has her eyes nearly closed.
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Postby Pa on Wed Dec 05, 2007 7:10 am

thanks PiroStitch and Marvin....i have tried to fix the white balance problem.....please tell me if i have been successful....thanks.


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Postby Biggzie on Wed Dec 05, 2007 10:04 am

Well my pick is #1 because she is showing her personality while interacting with you.
#3 gives the impression that she is totally confortable with you taking her photo so thats conveying her personality too.
#2 to get overly nit picky, looks borderlime 'told to smile' and doesnt quite have that natural personality show through. Its still a nice smile and photo, but the other 2 photos loose that pose feeling

Yes the white balance looks better now on my monitor.
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Postby Marvin on Wed Dec 05, 2007 10:32 pm

Hi Pa,
On my monitor, the second looks the best re white balance - it is still slightly warm. The third looks a bit too cool.
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Postby PiroStitch on Wed Dec 05, 2007 11:49 pm

reworked #1 is great! colour and WB is spot on! her expression and smile is priceless as well. hope you get that one printed up
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