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White on white

Postby dawesy on Sun Dec 09, 2007 3:55 am

Another shot I produced when thinking about this competition. Perhaps I should have gone with it? Who knows!

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Re: White on white

Postby Killakoala on Sun Dec 09, 2007 6:53 am

dawesy wrote:Another shot I produced when thinking about this competition. Perhaps I should have gone with it? Who knows!


All depends on how your actual entry went :)

As for this one, well I am feeling a little 'critique-al' this morning.

Here's what I would have done with this image.
1. Completely flatten out the tablecloth.
2. Frame the bowl in the middle of the image.
3. Higher contrast. (Get those whites really white)
4. Avoid the light fitting reflection in the bowl.

Of course that's just my opinion.
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