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i went to wine country but didnt drinkwent up to clare to shoot some shots, instead.
1/250, f8, iso100, nikon d200 w/10.5fish 1x 383, 1x555 self crit: lighting is good the fisheye does a reasonable job of accentuating how high this dude does his turndown to fakies. composition was hard... this park is surrounded by trees, and the ambient was still quite strong at this point. i think the trees are a little distracting. the quarter was also super slippery, which made composition even more difficult with the fish. there is a very feint shadow of me leaning in with the camera to get the shot. overall i think the shot is good, the trick is awesome, but the points i mention detract. thoughts? body: nikon d200, d70s, f4s, f601.
lens:nikon 35-70mm f2.8, 70-300mm f4-5.6, 10.5mm f2.8, 20mm f2.8, 28mm f2.8, 50mm f1.8. flash: nikon sb600, sunpak 383 (x1), sunpak 555 (x4), pocketwizard plus II (x4) jamesdwade.com dishonourclothing.com
That shot really works
It shows the rider, shows attitude of the trick, the image fits in the back ground. Awesomely well set up. Great shot. Waz whizzzz, there goes life again.....
But now captured on a Canon 40D with bits http://www.flickr.com/photos/wazonthehill/
great shot
the only thing I would do is clone in some of the trees to cover the patch of bright grass on the left... the rest is perfect
That's pretty cool. The lens distortion has really enhanced the feel of the image.
Steve.
|D700| D2H | F5 | 70-200VR | 85 1.4 | 50 1.4 | 28-70 | 10.5 | 12-24 | SB800 | Website-> http://www.stevekilburn.com Leeds United for promotion in 2014 - Hurrah!!!
thanks guys
body: nikon d200, d70s, f4s, f601.
lens:nikon 35-70mm f2.8, 70-300mm f4-5.6, 10.5mm f2.8, 20mm f2.8, 28mm f2.8, 50mm f1.8. flash: nikon sb600, sunpak 383 (x1), sunpak 555 (x4), pocketwizard plus II (x4) jamesdwade.com dishonourclothing.com
James,
I like this shot. I do not comment on too many of your pics, because a lot of the time, I feel I have nothing to add. The rider stands out from the background, and is easy enough to see. I think in a lot of your shots (due to the background) the rider blends into the background and is hard to see. This is definitely not the case here. I read your self crit, and I would not have thought / seen some of those things if you had not mentioned them yourself. I think sometimes we are own harshest critic. Russell
Nikon D700 // 50 1.4 // 70-200 2.8 VRII // 24-120 f4// Tamron 90 // SB-800 // 70-300G I'm on Redbubble too ... http://www.redbubble.com/people/rflower If you can make one of my photos look better and you have the inclination ... please do so.
cheers russell
i know that often we are our toughest critique, so your crit is appriciated body: nikon d200, d70s, f4s, f601.
lens:nikon 35-70mm f2.8, 70-300mm f4-5.6, 10.5mm f2.8, 20mm f2.8, 28mm f2.8, 50mm f1.8. flash: nikon sb600, sunpak 383 (x1), sunpak 555 (x4), pocketwizard plus II (x4) jamesdwade.com dishonourclothing.com
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