a portrait of my wife

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a portrait of my wife

Postby zeddy on Wed Jan 02, 2008 9:20 pm

this photo was taken of my wife in the kitchen using natural light coming in from a window from her right side.i know the colour temp is a little warm but i think it works.
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this is the same pic only converted to grayscale
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would like coments on which pp works best and how to improve the photo

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Postby colin_12 on Wed Jan 02, 2008 9:41 pm

I like the colour version Zeddy. But it looks a tad soft to me.
Mind you, you have to take what you can get with the other half as they are not all keen to be one's muse.
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Postby Bluebell on Wed Jan 02, 2008 10:24 pm

I like the colour version too; warm skin tone makes her look happy. :)
I think the grayscale is a bit severe.
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Postby mickeyjuice on Wed Jan 02, 2008 11:12 pm

Bluebell wrote:I like the colour version too; warm skin tone makes her look happy. :)
I think the grayscale is a bit severe.

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At least she's smiling for you - my wife either pulls faces or hides, usually :-)
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Postby Marvin on Wed Jan 02, 2008 11:38 pm

I had a bit of play in PS with the colour one to convert to B & W with a bit of a high key treatment. Here 'tis. Please let me know if you would like me to remove it and I will.
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Postby BullcreekBob on Thu Jan 03, 2008 2:22 pm

Marvin wrote:I had a bit of play in PS with the colour one to convert to B & W with a bit of a high key treatment. Here 'tis. Please let me know if you would like me to remove it and I will.
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I prefer this B/W treatment to the first B/W but neither cature the feel of the original colour capture. The warmth and softness just *work*
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Postby DanielA on Thu Jan 03, 2008 5:38 pm

Since going to B&W wasn't working out, I stuck to colour:

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I tweaked the white balance to make it not so yellow and followed these instructions to soften the skin. I think I went too far on the skin.

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Postby zeddy on Thu Jan 03, 2008 8:19 pm

thanks guys for your coments and pp efforts
Marvin for me your version seems too bright for my liking maybe half way between yor version and mine.i did use a strong contrast preset in lightroom.
daniel i kie what you have done here will have a play with the instructions
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