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First shot from Canada

Postby Manta on Fri Jan 04, 2008 9:04 pm

Well... the first one I have managed to properly process anyway!

Haliburton is a small town in central Ontario. This entire region is known as "Cottage Country" - a place where many city dwellers (predominantly Toronto in this case) have their holiday cottages. Some of these 'cottages' are multi-million dollar mansions with 9 or more bedrooms!

This farm was located down a lonely road. The dying sunlight peeped through the only blue sky we saw in 17 days. The temperature was around -2c which was actually quite warm.

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Postby Bluebell on Fri Jan 04, 2008 9:27 pm

Simply stunning. :D
I love the subtle colour in the background trees contrasted against the barn.
I hope we're going to see lots more :D
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Postby Ladybird on Fri Jan 04, 2008 9:31 pm

So you are back from the dead (of sleep) are you?

Beautiful image - you've got a good eye because I'm sure I would just walk straight past this.

Any more closer of the barn? It looks like it has interesting features, ie. stone wall and iron upper.
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Postby Manta on Fri Jan 04, 2008 9:45 pm

Thanks for your comments Bluebell and Ladybird

BB - I'm trying to troll through them all now - around 500 shots to go through but I'm not sure how many will be worthy of posting!

LB - Yep, certainly back on deck but another good night's sleep will help! This was as close as I could get. I was actually leaning over the fence. Along the road there were several signs warning about hunting or trespassing so I wasn't about to find out whether the owners actually hunted trespassers! :shock: A shame though. You're right, it was a gorgeous old building with lots of little bits and pieces to keep a photographer happy for weeks.
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Postby the foto fanatic on Fri Jan 04, 2008 10:07 pm

Hi Simon

You've done well with the exposure here.

The tree against the snow and sky is great - I think that I would like to see a bit more of the barn because it looks very interesting.
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Postby Mal on Fri Jan 04, 2008 10:08 pm

Simon it is nice to be looking as something so cool as I sit here in the summer heat.
I love the colours and framing of the shot. But my eye is drawn to the window in the middle of the barn. At first I thought it was the glass reflecting, but then I realsied that it must be looking straight through the barn.
Maybe the clone tool could help. But then again..........
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Postby big pix on Fri Jan 04, 2008 10:13 pm

well done Simon, very nice....... is it true that you have run away from home....... or just a rumour :lol: :lol: :lol:
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Postby Manta on Fri Jan 04, 2008 10:16 pm

Thanks Trevor. See note above about desire for more barn shorts versus desire for survival..!

Mal - I didn't even realise that doorway went straight through until you pointed it out! I think I'll leave it there if only to balance what would be a very dark part of the shot (and it's dark enough there as it is :) )

BP - I keep trying........!
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Postby the foto fanatic on Fri Jan 04, 2008 10:45 pm

Manta wrote:Thanks Trevor. See note above about desire for more barn shorts versus desire for survival..!


Ahh! I understand! Must have missed that bit. :oops:
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Postby blacknstormy on Sat Jan 05, 2008 11:02 am

Another great shot Simon :) One day I'll see snow in the 'flesh', but until then, your photos are good enough for me !!
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Postby gstark on Sat Jan 05, 2008 11:36 am

Simon,

What a beautiful shot. The desat that's in the forest in the background really adds genuine depth to this image. Print this big and sell it.
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Postby Manta on Sat Jan 05, 2008 12:55 pm

Pleased you like it Rel and Gary. As soon as I saw this scene my immediate reaction was, "That's the shot of the trip - now don't stuff it up!"
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Postby Bindii on Sat Jan 05, 2008 11:04 pm

Awww.. I really like that.. it looks like a postcard!
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Postby Manta on Sun Jan 06, 2008 9:19 am

Thanks Sue - I've ordered a few card versions of it through my Red Bubble account and will send them over to our generous hosts.
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Postby mickeyjuice on Sun Jan 06, 2008 11:41 am

Great shot, and fantastic exposure control in the snow.
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