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Continueing the series

Postby Alex on Sun Jan 13, 2008 12:22 am

Continueing my ghost series. Comments and suggestions are welcome as always.

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Re: Continueing the series

Postby Bindii on Sun Jan 13, 2008 8:31 pm

Well if you set out to scare the hell out of me its worked!

What an eerie image.. its good.. only niggle I have is maybe the light on her forehead is a little overdone maybe???.. :)
The last thing I want to do is hurt you... but it's still on the list... ;)
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Re: Continueing the series

Postby Alex on Sun Jan 13, 2008 8:57 pm

Thanks, Bindi. Appreciate your comments.

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Re: Continueing the series

Postby Alpha_7 on Mon Jan 14, 2008 9:59 am

Great concept, I'd suggest the blue light coming from camera left is a little hot, and as Sue said bring the face back a little to make it even more sinister and creepy, has a real Grudge / Ring type feel to it.

If you wanted to push the ghost theme even further, you could always flash then have the model duck down and expose some of the wall through her.
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