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Model Shoot: Ash (maybe not quite work safe)

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Model Shoot: Ash (maybe not quite work safe)

Postby MattyO on Sun Jan 13, 2008 8:21 pm

Okay everyone, another shoot for you to critique.... please let me know what you think.

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Re: Model Shoot: Ash (maybe not quite work safe)

Postby Bindii on Sun Jan 13, 2008 8:36 pm

The last two just rock! Not so sure on the posing in the second though as it looks like its not her hand on her breast there.. :)
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Re: Model Shoot: Ash (maybe not quite work safe)

Postby Oz_Beachside on Sun Jan 13, 2008 8:51 pm

hi matty

very nice shots. maybe a little sweat/oil/dirt to add her to the scene, but very nice shots anyway!
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agree with bindi, on one of the shots, looks like a strangers hand, or "the thing" from addams family...
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Re: Model Shoot: Ash (maybe not quite work safe)

Postby MattyO on Sun Jan 13, 2008 10:20 pm

okay everyone, managed to fix it so the images are displayed now...

makes things easier for everyone :)
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Re: Model Shoot: Ash (maybe not quite work safe)

Postby shakey on Mon Jan 14, 2008 12:38 am

NOT worksafe for sure. I'm sending the OH&S officer round right now. She definitely needs to put a hard hat on.
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Re: Model Shoot: Ash (maybe not quite work safe)

Postby Yi-P on Mon Jan 14, 2008 11:03 am

She is too clean to be on a construction site IMHO. A bit of mud, dirt, oil and others might be added to her body/makeup... Just a thought...
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Re: Model Shoot: Ash (maybe not quite work safe)

Postby Handlebars on Mon Jan 14, 2008 11:11 am

3 and 4 are great...

#2 looks like the glove is stuck to her boob, its kind of bizarre.... :shock:
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Re: Model Shoot: Ash (maybe not quite work safe)

Postby Matt. K on Mon Jan 14, 2008 11:27 am

Your work gets better and better. I'd still like to see the model forward of the backgrounds a little. This would throw them slightly out of focus and put more emphasis on the model.
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Re: Model Shoot: Ash (maybe not quite work safe)

Postby BullcreekBob on Mon Jan 14, 2008 2:46 pm

Bindii wrote: Not so sure on the posing in the second though as it looks like its not her hand on her breast there.. :)

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Re: Model Shoot: Ash (maybe not quite work safe)

Postby Blokeman on Mon Jan 14, 2008 3:43 pm

Can I ask about the lighting? I'm guessing the main light is a bit high and to your right, but the inside of the rims are pretty well lit too.
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Re: Model Shoot: Ash (maybe not quite work safe)

Postby who on Mon Jan 14, 2008 4:23 pm

Matty recently posted his newest toy, a massive softbox and battery power setup to run it.

So I'd guess that?
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Re: Model Shoot: Ash (maybe not quite work safe)

Postby Blokeman on Mon Jan 14, 2008 5:36 pm

who wrote:Matty recently posted his newest toy, a massive softbox and battery power setup to run it.
So I'd guess that?

Found it, thanks for the tip...
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Re: Model Shoot: Ash (maybe not quite work safe)

Postby Raskill on Tue Jan 15, 2008 10:09 am

Matty!!!!

These are really good. The last two are the best, like Matt K said, your going from strength to strength. Your aliens were a great investment. I agree that she needs to be 'dirtier', maybe some grease etc, but that is a minor point.

So wheres the cowgirl images?

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Re: Model Shoot: Ash (maybe not quite work safe)

Postby zafra52 on Tue Jan 15, 2008 7:08 pm

They are all very well photographed, but I prefer number 1 and 4.
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