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Eagle

Postby Oneputt on Mon Jan 21, 2008 7:51 pm

Whilst I didn't mind the last Wedgie I posted, I was inclined to have a bit of a play. What do people think?

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Re: Eagle

Postby Myrtle on Mon Jan 21, 2008 11:13 pm

Like it - took a pic of one of these the other day myself - result is :oops: to say the least when I look at yours. Can I ask what lens and settings you used?

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Re: Eagle

Postby Smurph on Mon Jan 21, 2008 11:39 pm

That is brilliant, actually no, that is F'ing brilliant. (Excuse the crudeness)

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Re: Eagle

Postby Killakoala on Tue Jan 22, 2008 6:37 am

That's a pretty cool look.
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Re: Eagle

Postby radar on Tue Jan 22, 2008 10:12 am

Nice one John,

I like the way you brought out the details in the wings. I would prefer to have seen it on a nice blue sky but it still works nicely on black.

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Re: Eagle

Postby Big Red on Tue Jan 22, 2008 3:57 pm

i really really like this and reckon it would look great on a wall :mrgreen:
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Re: Eagle

Postby whitey on Tue Jan 22, 2008 4:13 pm

Gee I thought the ones the other day were great. This one though is better.

The sort of shot that one day i hope to be able to produce.
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Re: Eagle

Postby whitey on Tue Jan 22, 2008 4:14 pm

Gee I thought the ones the other day were great. This one though is better.

The sort of shot that one day i hope to be able to produce.
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Re: Eagle

Postby marcotrov on Tue Jan 22, 2008 4:23 pm

A beautifully taken and presented image John.
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Re: Eagle

Postby blacknstormy on Tue Jan 22, 2008 4:33 pm

Hey John - I'm guessing it was done in PS? Try using a bleed or feather on the image when you select - there is a blue halo around the wings that is a bit distracting, and it is still a bit 'stark' around the rest of the bird (ie around the tail). Nice effort though :)
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Re: Eagle

Postby Big V on Tue Jan 22, 2008 4:49 pm

That is a really interesting take on a normal subject as we are so used to seeing these superb birds against a blue or grey sky.. Cool effect and it works well.
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Re: Eagle

Postby big pix on Tue Jan 22, 2008 5:08 pm

John, I find that the black background too strong for this image, but like what you are trying to achieve. I would look at a graduated background or a lighter colour so the bird does not sink into the background and becomes lost, for me it needs more of a contrast difference so your bird stands out....... then you may like the night look, so add a few stars........

EDIT: or an out of focus hills and sky for the background

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Re: Eagle

Postby Slider on Tue Jan 22, 2008 9:18 pm

You clearly have too much spare time !!!

Great result :D
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Re: Eagle

Postby chrisk on Tue Jan 22, 2008 10:01 pm

outstanding. really, really outstanding work.
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