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Cloud Bursting

Postby Nigell on Wed Jan 23, 2008 7:08 pm

Last of the miniatures (must be getting sick of them by now). C&C most welcome.
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Re: Cloud Bursting

Postby Yi-P on Wed Jan 23, 2008 7:31 pm

Chop the top away, its too much black. Make it sort of a 16:9 movie scene, would be perfect :D
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Re: Cloud Bursting

Postby Killakoala on Wed Jan 23, 2008 7:37 pm

Of the images you have shown, I like this one the best ;)
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Re: Cloud Bursting

Postby Ladybird on Thu Jan 24, 2008 9:50 am

:agree: Agree with Killakoala, this is definitely the best of your miniature series. This one appears more realistic, the others were creative but looked too much like a toy in the freezer.
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Re: Cloud Bursting

Postby Bindii on Thu Jan 24, 2008 2:04 pm

Oh see I haven't seen the other minature shots but I do really like this one! I agree about losing of the black area as its dominating too much of the frame... very clever btw.. :)
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