My First post

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My First post

Postby cobby1 on Sat Jan 26, 2008 9:28 pm

Dont be shy rip it apart :D

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2008/01/22 16:28:03.8
Compressed RAW (12-bit)
Image Size: Large (3872 x 2592)
Color
Lens: 90mm F/2.8 D
Focal Length: 90mm
Exposure Mode: Aperture Priority
Metering Mode: Multi-Pattern
1/60 sec - F/25
Exposure Comp.: 0 EV
Sensitivity: ISO 100
Optimize Image: Normal
White Balance: Auto
AF Mode: Manual
Flash Sync Mode: Front Curtain
Flash Mode: Built-in, Commander, i-TTL-BL

Cheers Cobby
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Re: My First post

Postby whitey on Sat Jan 26, 2008 10:04 pm

Looks great to me.

Makes me (a) happy I am buying a D80 and (b) want to buy a macro lens.

The only thing I dont like is the leaf in the top right. Great photo though.
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Re: My First post

Postby Matt. K on Sat Jan 26, 2008 10:23 pm

Not much to rip apart there! Big, lucious colours, sharp and good exposure. Welcome to the forum. Settle in and enjoy.
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Re: My First post

Postby colin_12 on Sat Jan 26, 2008 10:38 pm

The only rip that I could see is that the wasp looks dead.
Apart from that it is a great looking shot. Welcome to the forum.
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Re: My First post

Postby adame on Sat Jan 26, 2008 10:59 pm

Very nice image mate, Welcome to the forums.
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Re: My First post

Postby rflower on Sat Jan 26, 2008 11:02 pm

Awesome shot. Good DOF and colours.
Was this taken on a Tamron 90mm?

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Re: My First post

Postby cawdor on Sat Jan 26, 2008 11:05 pm

Very nice Cobby, sharp and great colours. May be my monitor but I think the front of the wasp is a touch too dark. Other than that nothing to pick on!!!
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Re: My First post

Postby cobby1 on Sat Jan 26, 2008 11:42 pm

Thanks Guys :D

The only rip that I could see is that the wasp looks dead.

Trust me this guy was alive :shock: :shock:

Yes it was the Tamron 90mm sp Macro GREAT LENS :D

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Re: My First post

Postby colin_12 on Sun Jan 27, 2008 12:42 am

In that case cudos to you for getting up close and personal with her.
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Re: My First post

Postby Pa on Sun Jan 27, 2008 3:55 am

hi Cobby and welcome.....beautiful colour....good detail..well done.
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Re: My First post

Postby gstark on Sun Jan 27, 2008 8:55 am

Hi, and welcome to the forums.

As others have said, you have done well with this image: great colours, depth of field ....

However, could you please take a few moments to review our FAQ. This image has a width of 1024px, and a file size of about a half a megabyte. That is way too big for posting here: the maximum size of any dimension should not exceed 800 px, and you should, for a number of reasons, significantly reduce your filesize: for one thing, not everyone here has the luxury of broadband, and a file of this size will not be a pretty site for them. For another, there are people who may wih to steal your IP. Putting up an image of this size leaves you open to such theft. It's very easy to reduce the size of the image's file, without decreasing the apparent veiwing quality as seen on the web.

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Re: My First post

Postby shakey on Sun Jan 27, 2008 10:06 am

gstark wrote:However, could you please take a few moments to review our FAQ. This image has a width of 1024px, and a file size of about a half a megabyte. That is way too big for posting here: the maximum size of any dimension should not exceed 800 px, and you should, for a number of reasons, significantly reduce your filesize: for one thing, not everyone here has the luxury of broadband, and a file of this size will not be a pretty site for them. For another, there are people who may wih to steal your IP. Putting up an image of this size leaves you open to such theft. It's very easy to reduce the size of the image's file, without decreasing the apparent veiwing quality as seen on the web.


Actually, I don't think the size limitations are in the FAQ. I can't find them anyway. (Boy's look though. :) ) As far as I can tell the size limitations are in Stubbsy's posting guidelines as a recommendation.

I did view the image on dial up and it did take about a minute to download.

Took me a little while to work out that IP stood for "intellectual property" and not "internet address". I'm sitting here, scratching my head, wondering how a large image can make your internet address vulnerable. My "duh" moment for the day. Well there's still a lot of time left for more "duh" moments, but that was a good start.
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Re: My First post

Postby gstark on Sun Jan 27, 2008 10:23 am

shakey wrote:I did view the image on dial up and it did take about a minute to download.



It shouldn't. :)

That's the point.
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Re: My First post

Postby cobby1 on Sun Jan 27, 2008 10:42 am

Sorry about the size :oops:

I have changed it :D

Hope this is OK :D

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Re: My First post

Postby Killakoala on Sun Jan 27, 2008 10:50 am

Nice one Cobby. That's a very nice image. Welcome to the forum.
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Re: My First post

Postby zafra52 on Sun Jan 27, 2008 11:57 am

Excellent image. Congratulations!
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Re: My First post

Postby ozimax on Sun Jan 27, 2008 2:05 pm

Nice image Cobby, sharp and colourful.
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Re: My First post

Postby cobby1 on Sun Jan 27, 2008 4:42 pm

Thanks for the warm Welcome People :D :D

Sorry about the size Cock up :oops: :oops:

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Re: My First post

Postby chrisk on Sun Jan 27, 2008 7:22 pm

welcome to the forum. great first image and good to see another macro shooter here !

having been a previous very happy owner of the tammie, i have some great experences with it. my 2 suggestions would be to not stop down so much. its nice to have the dof if thas what you want, but the tammie loses sharpness sigificantly from diffraction after around f11. i would never stop down smaller than f16. at f25 you're actually down to less than half of its resolution capabilities. i'd also bump up your iso. in that shot, around 800 would have worked to bring out the shadows in the foreground a little more.

look forward to some more of your work. :D
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Re: My First post

Postby cobby1 on Sun Jan 27, 2008 7:39 pm

Thanks for the input Mate :D

Will give your suggestions a try :D

And yes i love Macro :D

But having seen some of the pics on this site i might have a go at some outher stuff :D

Thanks guys :D
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