A few from the Jetty

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A few from the Jetty

Postby ozimax on Fri Jan 25, 2008 6:13 pm

Took a few shots at the Jetty as a celebration. A celebration? Yep, the first time I've seen the sun in many weeks, and guess what, it's pouring rain again today. That's the north coast for you.

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Re: A few from the Jetty

Postby sirhc55 on Fri Jan 25, 2008 6:24 pm

The lighting in the first is just sublime :)
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Re: A few from the Jetty

Postby gstark on Fri Jan 25, 2008 6:32 pm

What Chris said.
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Re: A few from the Jetty

Postby Pa on Fri Jan 25, 2008 6:36 pm

what Chris and Gary said....i do like the second image as well.
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Re: A few from the Jetty

Postby ozimax on Fri Jan 25, 2008 6:37 pm

Thanks Chris & Gary, it was blowing a gale so I just stuck the 10-22 lens on my tripod at F18 (or was it F22?) I think, used the self timer and held down the tripod...great light but fair dinkum, it never stops raining. However, we must be thankful for the rain... :)
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Re: A few from the Jetty

Postby ozimax on Fri Jan 25, 2008 6:38 pm

Thanks Pa, too.
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Re: A few from the Jetty

Postby Glen on Fri Jan 25, 2008 7:14 pm

That first has beautiful light and tones Ozi
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Re: A few from the Jetty

Postby whitey on Fri Jan 25, 2008 7:17 pm

#1 superb. The reflection on the beach is very nice.
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Re: A few from the Jetty

Postby gstark on Fri Jan 25, 2008 7:59 pm

ozimax wrote:Thanks Chris & Gary, it was blowing a gale so I just stuck the 10-22 lens on my tripod



Hey, cool!

Look Ma, no camera! :)
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Re: A few from the Jetty

Postby marcotrov on Fri Jan 25, 2008 8:28 pm

Both great images that make the most of the wonderful lighting. Well done ozimax.
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Re: A few from the Jetty

Postby chrisk on Fri Jan 25, 2008 9:30 pm

both shots are great. i prefer the lighting and reflections in the first but i like the composition of the 2nd better.
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Re: A few from the Jetty

Postby big pix on Fri Jan 25, 2008 9:41 pm

both great shots. & magic lighting :up: ...... you are going to wear that lens out :mrgreen: :mrgreen: :mrgreen:
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Re: A few from the Jetty

Postby ozimax on Fri Jan 25, 2008 10:34 pm

gstark wrote:
ozimax wrote:Thanks Chris & Gary, it was blowing a gale so I just stuck the 10-22 lens on my tripod

Hey, cool!
Look Ma, no camera! :)


I knew someone was going to say that!!! :D Actually, this lens is marvellous, does away with the need for a camera body indeed... :lol:
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Re: A few from the Jetty

Postby the foto fanatic on Fri Jan 25, 2008 11:11 pm

Very nice! :D
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Re: A few from the Jetty

Postby Matt. K on Fri Jan 25, 2008 11:11 pm

Now that's using the light! Beautiful!
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Re: A few from the Jetty

Postby matt-chops on Sat Jan 26, 2008 12:40 am

These 2 are both composed beautifully and have excellent colour. Nice work! :D
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Re: A few from the Jetty

Postby rflower on Sat Jan 26, 2008 10:05 am

:agree: These shots are fantastic. Especially love the reflections and light in the first
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Re: A few from the Jetty

Postby Jeff on Sat Jan 26, 2008 12:08 pm

As everyone has said great light .

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Re: A few from the Jetty

Postby ozimax on Sat Jan 26, 2008 12:16 pm

Thank you all for the kind comments. I know it's been said so many times, but light is everything in photography, more important than camera bodies, conditions, lens.

For those just starting out in this wonderful hobby/profession/whatever, the last few minutes before the sun slips over the horizon is the time to shoot, if you can.

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Re: A few from the Jetty

Postby Big V on Sat Jan 26, 2008 1:35 pm

That first shot would look great as a pano - magical light being reflected off the jetty and water.
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Re: A few from the Jetty

Postby ozimax on Sat Jan 26, 2008 2:09 pm

Big V wrote:That first shot would look great as a pano - magical light being reflected off the jetty and water.


Good point, actually with the 10-22mm I haven't needed to think about panos that much, you can fit so much into the frame!
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Re: A few from the Jetty

Postby radar on Sat Jan 26, 2008 5:18 pm

Well done,

love the light in the first and the composition,

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Re: A few from the Jetty

Postby ATJ on Sat Jan 26, 2008 6:55 pm

I prefer the light in the first, but I love the perspective in the second.

You say it was blowing a gale but it looks a lot flatter than the day I dived under the jetty.
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Re: A few from the Jetty

Postby ozimax on Sat Jan 26, 2008 8:00 pm

ATJ wrote:You say it was blowing a gale but it looks a lot flatter than the day I dived under the jetty.


If you meant the 1st week in January when there were massive swells coming through the harbour, yes, you're right, it definitely was not that bad!
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Re: A few from the Jetty

Postby ATJ on Sun Jan 27, 2008 9:28 am

Ozi,

It was 21 September last year. We'd drove from Sydney to Mollaway on the 20th to dive the Solitary Islands. The boat wouldn't take us out on the 21st because it was too rough so we had a whole day to kill. Late in the afternoon we got a bright idea to dive the Jetty. We got there around 4pm, just after high tide (tide was much higher than in your pictures) and the waves were far too large to hit the water from the beach. We ended up going in at the steps half way along - it was actually quite calm there. http://www.petsforum.com/personal/trevor-jones/Dive200792116Jetty.html

I reckon it would be an interesting dive with less wind and diving in the middle of the day.
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Re: A few from the Jetty

Postby Pehpsi on Tue Jan 29, 2008 7:42 pm

Love #1 for the obvious reasons :) Very nice indeed..
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Re: A few from the Jetty

Postby DJT on Tue Jan 29, 2008 9:30 pm

Wonderful pics that bring back memories, my kids caught their first fish(s) from that wharf.
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