Model Shoot - Kristy Sydney

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Model Shoot - Kristy Sydney

Postby Cre8tivepixels on Wed Feb 13, 2008 8:31 pm

Thanks for looking........

Advice and technical help always appreciated and welcomed :)

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Re: Model Shoot - Kristy Sydney

Postby Glen on Wed Feb 13, 2008 10:23 pm

Dan, I like how you push boundaries but I think the makeup artist gave the model too many chocolate biscuits in 1 and some got caught on her lips :lol: Too bold for me though I like the rest
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Re: Model Shoot - Kristy Sydney

Postby W00DY on Wed Feb 13, 2008 10:48 pm

Out of curiosity was the chocolate lips for a particular job? or was it just something you wanted to try?

As Glen said, you push the boundaries and do it well.

I love number 3. Especially the light behind her back, this works really well.

Good stuff.

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Re: Model Shoot - Kristy Sydney

Postby shakey on Thu Feb 14, 2008 1:21 am

WTF is #1 about? Looks like she's kissed that Indonesian tree man. #2...the pose looks very uncomfortable, and not particularly attractive, and then you've got those two snakey bits of hair on the front of her chest. I like the golden light, but I think you could have posed the model better #3...Are these shots from your bathroom? I like the cool geen-blue OOF background. I think I'd clone out the door hinge though. #4 is classic cheesecake. Jungle bikini and tarzan vines in the background. Reminds me what PIX magazine used to be like.

On a completely different note..and nothing to do with my opinions about the photos

Your model would seem to have a lot of moles on her skin. The more the number of moles, the higher the risk of melanoma (esp when total body count greater than 100). Suggest that your model gets a skin check by her GP and institute a skin surveillance program if approriate. If she has already done that, then cool.
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Re: Model Shoot - Kristy Sydney

Postby Cre8tivepixels on Thu Feb 14, 2008 2:35 pm

Thanks for the time to comment guys :)

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