Blue Eyed Stare (Egypt)

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Blue Eyed Stare (Egypt)

Postby Alpha_7 on Thu Feb 14, 2008 9:54 pm

When I was in Egypt, I had the pleasure of meeting Mohamed, he was a temple guide (self employed) at Kom Ombo temple right on the Nile. The temple was a really interesting one behind built for two Gods, so there was a special symmetry in it's design. Mohamed kindly pointed out some of the finer points of the temple in return for baksheesh(tips), we'd been chatting and I couldn't get over his bright blue eyes, I even question if they were real, and he opened his lids to show no contacts. In negotiating a price, I decide I wanted a few photos of him as his face and eyes were just portrait worthy. So I paid him a little extra for a few shots of him, and later a mate of his joined as well, but it was him alone that seemed to work the best.
(Overall I had a fantastic time, but enjoyed the tour, the culture, food and people so much I found it hard to keep getting the camera out, as it impede my experiences so photographically the tour wasn't as rich as I had hoped, but I came back with a wealth of memories and friends which far out weigh the photos I didn't take).

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Re: Blue Eyed Stare (Egypt)

Postby Matt. K on Thu Feb 14, 2008 9:59 pm

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That's a beautiful image! The colours are so earthy and the modelling on the face is supurb!
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Re: Blue Eyed Stare (Egypt)

Postby Bindii on Thu Feb 14, 2008 10:02 pm

Wow his eyes are so blue that its almost eerie... did you add any saturation or anything to them or are they really the colour as you saw them?..

Fantastic image btw.. its very captivating.. tones.. background..pose and light... everything is just right... :)
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Re: Blue Eyed Stare (Egypt)

Postby Yi-P on Thu Feb 14, 2008 10:10 pm

I like it very much, the image got its own story and soul here
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Re: Blue Eyed Stare (Egypt)

Postby Big V on Thu Feb 14, 2008 10:14 pm

Awesome image
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Re: Blue Eyed Stare (Egypt)

Postby ChrisB on Thu Feb 14, 2008 10:15 pm

Those eyes are just amazing!

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Re: Blue Eyed Stare (Egypt)

Postby Alpha_7 on Thu Feb 14, 2008 10:16 pm

Bindii wrote:Wow his eyes are so blue that its almost eerie... did you add any saturation or anything to them or are they really the colour as you saw them?..

Fantastic image btw.. its very captivating.. tones.. background..pose and light... everything is just right... :)


The eyes are as I saw them but I have pulled back the saturation on the rest of the image a little to just add to the POP factor of his eyes, it was almost other worldly, it just seemed to bizarre and unexpected!
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Re: Blue Eyed Stare (Egypt)

Postby Alex on Thu Feb 14, 2008 10:32 pm

Fantastic capture, Craig. Well done. The eyes are captivating.

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Re: Blue Eyed Stare (Egypt)

Postby sirhc55 on Thu Feb 14, 2008 10:42 pm

Excellent Craig :)
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Re: Blue Eyed Stare (Egypt)

Postby BullcreekBob on Fri Feb 15, 2008 1:21 am

Did you say he was from Egypt or Arakis?
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Re: Blue Eyed Stare (Egypt)

Postby Bluebell on Fri Feb 15, 2008 6:16 am

Wonderful picture Craig. :D
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Re: Blue Eyed Stare (Egypt)

Postby radar on Fri Feb 15, 2008 8:14 am

Great image Craig,

sounds like you had a great trip. This image certainly will evoke some great memories,

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Re: Blue Eyed Stare (Egypt)

Postby Oneputt on Fri Feb 15, 2008 8:31 am

Really nice Craig, one to hang on the wall. :D
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Re: Blue Eyed Stare (Egypt)

Postby Glen on Fri Feb 15, 2008 8:44 am

Fantastic portrait Craig
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Re: Blue Eyed Stare (Egypt)

Postby norbs on Fri Feb 15, 2008 9:25 am

Very nice shot Craig.
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Re: Blue Eyed Stare (Egypt)

Postby Onyx on Fri Feb 15, 2008 11:17 am

That is a fantastic shot Craig. Eerie such light coloured iris, but a fantastic image.
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Re: Blue Eyed Stare (Egypt)

Postby Geoff on Fri Feb 15, 2008 5:07 pm

Craig, it's already been said by many, I too think this is a fantastic image!! Beautifully captured!
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Re: Blue Eyed Stare (Egypt)

Postby johnd on Fri Feb 15, 2008 6:08 pm

Now that's an awesome portrait Craig. I think I'll go check out your website for more.

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Re: Blue Eyed Stare (Egypt)

Postby Alpha_7 on Fri Feb 15, 2008 6:15 pm

johnd wrote:Now that's an awesome portrait Craig. I think I'll go check out your website for more.

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I'm still importing them all into Lightroom, I hope to work on a few more over the weekend. These three were crying out to be shared, I haven't found too many more with the same appeal, so please don't get your hopes up!
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Re: Blue Eyed Stare (Egypt)

Postby drifter on Fri Feb 15, 2008 9:29 pm

Brilliant shot. :cheers:
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Re: Blue Eyed Stare (Egypt)

Postby Killakoala on Sat Feb 16, 2008 7:59 am

Alpha_7 wrote: <SNIP>These three were crying out to be shared, I haven't found too many more with the same appeal, so please don't get your hopes up!


You just need to be less critical. I am sure you have some other gems Craig.
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Re: Blue Eyed Stare (Egypt)

Postby marcotrov on Sat Feb 16, 2008 9:19 am

The eyes have it Craig. A powerfully constructed image.
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Re: Blue Eyed Stare (Egypt)

Postby ozimax on Sat Feb 16, 2008 1:49 pm

Wonderful, this is POTW material, someone pick it please...

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Re: Blue Eyed Stare (Egypt)

Postby Alpha_7 on Sun Feb 17, 2008 9:32 pm

I just thought I'd ask if anyone actually had some criticism, I have a few niggles with the image and was expecting someone out there to notice or comment on them (cropped off his hat, the lights (white OOF areas in the temple) etc).
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Re: Blue Eyed Stare (Egypt)

Postby ozimax on Sun Feb 17, 2008 9:56 pm

No criticism from me, you cropped in good and close to get a great image. (You did crop didn't you?) If not, it's an even better shot! :)
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Re: Blue Eyed Stare (Egypt)

Postby Viz on Sun Feb 17, 2008 10:06 pm

Fantastic image.
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Re: Blue Eyed Stare (Egypt)

Postby Alpha_7 on Sun Feb 17, 2008 10:08 pm

ozimax wrote:No criticism from me, you cropped in good and close to get a great image. (You did crop didn't you?) If not, it's an even better shot! :)

No cropping, this is the full frame, I do have a few other shots, but this was my preferred one.
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Re: Blue Eyed Stare (Egypt)

Postby phillipb on Sun Feb 17, 2008 10:08 pm

Alpha_7 wrote:I just thought I'd ask if anyone actually had some criticism, I have a few niggles with the image and was expecting someone out there to notice or comment on them (cropped off his hat, the lights (white OOF areas in the temple) etc).


I think it's a great shot too, but if I had to be super critical, I would probably rotate the photo a few degrees clockwise to reduce the lean on the buildings in the background and maybe crop a bit closer still, like this...

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Re: Blue Eyed Stare (Egypt)

Postby Alpha_7 on Sun Feb 17, 2008 10:18 pm

Thanks Phillip, I like how your crop has remove most of the white lights in the background that I found distracting.
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Re: Blue Eyed Stare (Egypt)

Postby johnd on Mon Feb 18, 2008 1:06 pm

Craig, I agree with Phillip about straightening the building, but I really like your original crop. I have no issue with cropping off his hat. Some portraits work best with a tight crop, but the temple background helps this image IMHO. Obviously the OOF lights are worrying you though. That should be a minor photoshop task to clone the lights out.

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Re: Blue Eyed Stare (Egypt)

Postby Pehpsi on Mon Feb 18, 2008 1:20 pm

Really great shot, man. The expression on his face is hard to figure out.. And his eyes just pop from the screen.
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Re: Blue Eyed Stare (Egypt)

Postby Alpha_7 on Mon Feb 18, 2008 10:56 pm

Is this better ?
Straightened and the lights have been cloned (fairly poorly)
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Re: Blue Eyed Stare (Egypt)

Postby johnd on Tue Feb 19, 2008 10:49 am

Craig, you've kept the landscape orientation with the temple surrounds to give the portrait some great context. The cloning of the lights looks fine to me (not fairly poorly imho). The straightening has helped as well. I reckon this is a cracker image. Print it big and frame it. Well done.

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Re: Blue Eyed Stare (Egypt)

Postby marcotrov on Tue Feb 19, 2008 10:18 pm

This is a masterpiece environmental portrait Craig. Your adjustments are well worth it and truly enhance the image. Congratulations.
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Re: Blue Eyed Stare (Egypt)

Postby Oscar on Wed Feb 20, 2008 8:37 am

Excellent capture Craig (I missed spotting this one earlier). Well done.
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