Basketball and shadows

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Basketball and shadows

Postby dooda on Wed Feb 16, 2005 3:06 pm

I took several pics of these guys, many getting the ball in midair and exposing the sky better, but something I like about this one.

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Postby sirhc55 on Wed Feb 16, 2005 3:08 pm

I agree - I just looked and looked. I like it too and would not want to point out any problems with it because it has held my attention.

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Postby Glen on Wed Feb 16, 2005 3:26 pm

Hooked me too Dooda, sign of a good photo
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Postby phillipb on Wed Feb 16, 2005 4:47 pm

Same here, only I think I realise what I was looking for was the ball on it's way into the basket.
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Postby flipfrog on Thu Feb 17, 2005 6:33 am

which court is this Dave?

nice capture !
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Postby dooda on Thu Feb 17, 2005 7:35 am

THESE are the ambleside courts. Amazing that in one place kids are playing basketball,20 minutes away they are snowboarding. Unique town when you think about it.
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Postby the foto fanatic on Thu Feb 17, 2005 8:03 am

Don't quite let this one - it's neither one thing nor the other to me.

I think I would like it more if there was a tighter crop around the players.

I also think the hot spot in the sky detracts.

But, the subject matter is worth pursuing.
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Postby dooda on Thu Feb 17, 2005 3:55 pm

The cropping seemed like a pretty good idea. I think I did some other things to it as well but I can't remember what. Does this work better? The second one focuses more on the subject, the first one more on the scene. Wow, I can't believe how different this one looks compared to my computer. Once on the internet it looks quite bland.

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Postby Neeper on Thu Feb 17, 2005 4:07 pm

I like it Dooda. It works for me.
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Postby stubbsy on Thu Feb 17, 2005 4:39 pm

dooda wrote:... Once on the internet it looks quite bland.

Dooda

Have a look at this thread I created a while back. Your problem may be the one I had & fixed.

Edit: Ooops. Dooda, just noticed you've been there before!
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Postby the foto fanatic on Thu Feb 17, 2005 4:51 pm

dooda wrote:The cropping seemed like a pretty good idea.
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Yes, I think the tighter look improves it significantly dooda.
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Postby sirhc55 on Thu Feb 17, 2005 4:56 pm

Dave - another viewpoint - I actually still prefer the original as it has the space around to show the isolation of the action within the frame and the loneliness of the location
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Postby dooda on Thu Feb 17, 2005 5:01 pm

stubbsy wrote:
dooda wrote:... Once on the internet it looks quite bland.

Dooda

Have a look at this thread I created a while back. Your problem may be the one I had & fixed.

Edit: Ooops. Dooda, just noticed you've been there before!


Yes I remember it. But I suck at doing searches and would never have found it. Also thinking back to the solution, I don't think I had a single clue as to what you guys were talking about. I'll go back now and have a tinker.
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Postby ru32day on Fri Feb 18, 2005 12:33 am

I like the original much better - more space and mood and much more original than the cropped version, which has more of a "same old" feel for me.

The first version immediately grabbed my attention.
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