First sunrise

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First sunrise

Postby whitey on Wed Feb 20, 2008 12:19 am

So the kids woke me up early on Sunday morning - so I tried a sunrise for the first time.

Should I crop out the dam in the foreground? What about pp - this is straight out of the camera.

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Re: First sunrise

Postby Steffen on Wed Feb 20, 2008 1:26 am

deadgoose wrote:Should I crop out the dam in the foreground?


No, not at all, leave the damn dam in! It sets this image apart from a bazillion other sun{set,rise} shots. It's a great capture, and doesn't appear to require any PP (unless you want to go all candy-colour, which would move the image a lot closer to the bazillion).

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Re: First sunrise

Postby Pehpsi on Wed Feb 20, 2008 2:04 am

Looks great as is. Well composed, too.
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Re: First sunrise

Postby whitey on Wed Feb 20, 2008 11:04 am

Thanks Guys, my aim is to minimise PP.
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Re: First sunrise

Postby wazonthehill2 on Wed Feb 20, 2008 1:05 pm

I would have grad a portrait orientated shot as well with more lake and relection and less dark edges.
Looks good.
Also play with white balance settings and view results, ie cloudy or shade can produce good effects, and tugnsten looks real interesting
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Re: First sunrise

Postby whitey on Wed Feb 20, 2008 1:39 pm

wazonthehill2 wrote:I would have grad a portrait orientated shot as well with more lake and relection and less dark edges.


Sorta like this one?

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Re: First sunrise

Postby CraigVTR on Wed Feb 20, 2008 2:21 pm

Great shots
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Re: First sunrise

Postby zafra52 on Wed Feb 20, 2008 10:47 pm

I like the first posting better because it has deeper colour and more shadows and this contributes to create a mood.
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Re: First sunrise

Postby jdear_89 on Thu Feb 21, 2008 6:44 pm

i would have to agree with zafra, i much prefer the first post - the higher clouds contribute to the mood and i prefer it in landscape format.
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Re: First sunrise

Postby colin_12 on Thu Feb 21, 2008 9:30 pm

I like the first as well. I would consider croping out some of the top of this though.
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Re: First sunrise

Postby sirhc55 on Thu Feb 21, 2008 10:08 pm

Why screw around with a perfect shot :wink: Just a thought, I did not know that cameras existed for the first sunrise :lol: :lol: 8)
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Re: First sunrise

Postby Steffen on Fri Feb 22, 2008 3:34 pm

sirhc55 wrote:Why screw around with a perfect shot :wink: Just a thought, I did not know that cameras existed for the first sunrise :lol: :lol: 8)


Apparently, He was a smart fella, creating cameras *before* there was anything beautiful to shoot...

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