Stars and Painting with Light

Got a thin skin? Then look elsewhere. Post a link to an image that you've made, and invite others to offer their critiques. Honesty is encouraged, but please be positive in your constructive criticism. Flaming and just plain nastiness will not be tolerated. Please note that this is not an area for you to showcase your images, nor is this a place for you to show-off where you have been. This is an area for you to post images so that you may share with us a technique that you have mastered, or are trying to master. Typically, no more than about four images should be posted in any one post or thread, and the maximum size of any side of any image should not exceed 950 px.

Moderators: Greg B, Nnnnsic, Geoff, Glen, gstark, Moderators

Forum rules
Please note that image critiquing is a matter of give and take: if you post images for critique, and you then expect to receive criticism, then it is also reasonable, fair and appropriate that, in return, you post your critique of the images of other members here as a matter of courtesy. So please do offer your critique of the images of others; your opinion is important, and will help everyone here enjoy their visit to far greater extent.

Also please note that, unless you state something to the contrary, other members might attempt to repost your image with their own post processing applied. We see this as an acceptable form of critique, but should you prefer that others not modify your work, this is perfectly ok, and you should state this, either within your post, or within your signature.

Images posted here should conform with the general forum guidelines. Image sizes should not exceed 950 pixels along the largest side (height or width) and typically no more than four images per post or thread.

Please also ensure that you have a meaningful location included in your profile. Please refer to the FAQ for details of what "meaningful" is.

Stars and Painting with Light

Postby MATT on Thu Mar 06, 2008 9:50 am

A few from tonight...D300+sigma 10-20 f4.0 30sec.. Led torch

Image


Another

Image


Regards
MATT
User avatar
MATT
Senior Member
 
Posts: 1748
Joined: Sat Oct 23, 2004 8:24 pm
Location: Biloela, QLD-----nikon--D700-----

Re: Stars and Painting with Light

Postby the foto fanatic on Thu Mar 06, 2008 10:37 am

Wow, cool effect! I really love the second one - it's very indicative of us insignificant humans.

Skies like that just aren't visible for city dwellers because of our light pollution. Maybe on Green Day!
TFF (Trevor)
My History Blog: Your Brisbane: Past & Present
My Photo Blog: The Foto Fanatic
Nikon stuff!
User avatar
the foto fanatic
Moderator
 
Posts: 4212
Joined: Tue Aug 24, 2004 7:53 pm
Location: Teneriffe, Brisbane

Re: Stars and Painting with Light

Postby libertyterran on Thu Mar 06, 2008 10:53 am

Wow, really cool photos. I never tried this before. 2nd photo has nice composition. GJ
libertyterran
Member
 
Posts: 70
Joined: Tue Sep 04, 2007 12:28 am

Re: Stars and Painting with Light

Postby seeto.centric on Thu Mar 06, 2008 11:23 am

wow.. i couldnt see anything here on tuesday night.. but it was a bit cloudy.

-j
User avatar
seeto.centric
Member
 
Posts: 488
Joined: Fri Jun 09, 2006 12:33 pm
Location: Baulkham Hills/2153. Sydney

Re: Stars and Painting with Light

Postby christiand on Thu Mar 06, 2008 11:27 am

Holy tomato :D

I find these fotos amazing, they show us in relation to the universe very well.
And they also show exactly what I can sometimes see in the night skies above where we live.
What were the exposure details ?

Regards,
CD
User avatar
christiand
Senior Member
 
Posts: 1989
Joined: Sat Aug 14, 2004 1:36 pm
Location: Tuggeranong, ACT - Canberra

Re: Stars and Painting with Light

Postby Alpha_7 on Thu Mar 06, 2008 11:39 am

Nice work I really like the second one, you've done a great job of getting a even exposure on the house, but I'd like to see the distortion corrected just a little before the house falls over.
User avatar
Alpha_7
Senior Member
 
Posts: 7259
Joined: Sun Aug 14, 2005 6:19 pm
Location: Mortdale - Sydney - Nikon D700, x-D200, Leica, G9

Re: Stars and Painting with Light

Postby Oneputt on Thu Mar 06, 2008 11:46 am

Matt I really like the second has a great feel to it. Perhaps a little perspective correction might improve it further :cheers:
"The good thing about meditation is that it makes doing nothing respectable"

D3 - http://www.oneputtphotographics.com
User avatar
Oneputt
Senior Member
 
Posts: 3174
Joined: Tue Jan 04, 2005 3:58 pm
Location: Stuck in traffic Maroochydore.

Re: Stars and Painting with Light

Postby Pehpsi on Thu Mar 06, 2008 11:49 am

Very cool, love the second :) Where does the torch come into play??
Nikon D70
12-24 DX, 18-70 DX, 70-200 VR

20" iMac Intel C2D
Aperture 2.1
PS CS3

http://www.jamesrobertphotography.com
User avatar
Pehpsi
Senior Member
 
Posts: 1418
Joined: Tue Nov 07, 2006 10:24 pm
Location: Kingsgrove, Sydney

Re: Stars and Painting with Light

Postby phoenix on Thu Mar 06, 2008 11:58 am

Nice photos! These remind me of a photo i saw a while ago, where a guy was shooting an old castle at night, and set his exposure on bulb. Then he ran up to the castle with this big light and shone it on different parts to light it up. It looked awesome.
phoenix
Member
 
Posts: 222
Joined: Tue Feb 19, 2008 1:32 pm
Location: Queanbeyan, NSW

Re: Stars and Painting with Light

Postby MATT on Thu Mar 06, 2008 12:49 pm

Pehpsi wrote:Very cool, love the second :) Where does the torch come into play??



The house is in darkness, then you shine the light over the house during to expose it. The blue look is from the white LED torch I used.

Oneput how do I go about correcting the perspective? DXo???

Thanks for the feed back. Clear sky and lovely night
MATT
User avatar
MATT
Senior Member
 
Posts: 1748
Joined: Sat Oct 23, 2004 8:24 pm
Location: Biloela, QLD-----nikon--D700-----

Re: Stars and Painting with Light

Postby Oneputt on Thu Mar 06, 2008 2:19 pm

Sorry Matt I only know how to do it in PS. :oops:
"The good thing about meditation is that it makes doing nothing respectable"

D3 - http://www.oneputtphotographics.com
User avatar
Oneputt
Senior Member
 
Posts: 3174
Joined: Tue Jan 04, 2005 3:58 pm
Location: Stuck in traffic Maroochydore.

Re: Stars and Painting with Light

Postby stubbsy on Thu Mar 06, 2008 5:47 pm

Matt

Great shots. #2 especially. You can do perspective correction in a number of programs eg both DxO and PSCS. DO you have either of these? And FWIW I agree with John it would enhance the shot to do some correction.
Peter
Disclaimer: I know nothing about anything.
*** smugmug galleries: http://www.stubbsy.smugmug.com ***
User avatar
stubbsy
Moderator
 
Posts: 10748
Joined: Wed Dec 08, 2004 7:44 pm
Location: Newcastle NSW - D700

Re: Stars and Painting with Light

Postby Matt. K on Thu Mar 06, 2008 8:36 pm

Matt
Don't listen to Stubbsy, he is a compulsive obsessive! Buildings don't have to be vertically correct. Stick your head between your legs and look at the world. Is it all geometrically corrected? Of course not. Is it a valid view of the world? Of course it is. Your pics are great just as they are. Peter....relax....try some recreational drugs....let go. :D :D :D
Regards

Matt. K
User avatar
Matt. K
Former Outstanding Member Of The Year and KM
 
Posts: 9981
Joined: Mon Sep 06, 2004 7:12 pm
Location: North Nowra

Re: Stars and Painting with Light

Postby Viz on Thu Mar 06, 2008 8:56 pm

I am impressed by your LED torch - the lumen master!

And the 2nd photo is great, but other people have commented aptly on that.
Dan The Batch Automator
User avatar
Viz
Member
 
Posts: 176
Joined: Fri Oct 13, 2006 8:46 pm
Location: Leichhardt, Sydney

Re: Stars and Painting with Light

Postby Merkyone on Fri Mar 07, 2008 8:24 pm

Long time lurker, first time poster.

Really love your second pic Matt. Magic star capture; I'm quite jealous!

The LED effect gives the image a surreal quality. Nice work!
Last edited by Merkyone on Fri Mar 07, 2008 8:30 pm, edited 1 time in total.
Adam
Merkyone
Member
 
Posts: 60
Joined: Fri Mar 07, 2008 8:20 pm
Location: Turner, ACT

Re: Stars and Painting with Light

Postby MHD on Fri Mar 07, 2008 8:29 pm

Second one is great... must get great night skies where you live!
New page
http://www.potofgrass.com
Portfolio...
http://images.potofgrass.com
Comments and money always welcome
User avatar
MHD
Moderator
 
Posts: 5829
Joined: Sat Sep 11, 2004 8:51 pm
Location: Chicago Burbs

Re: Stars and Painting with Light

Postby jethro on Fri Mar 07, 2008 9:01 pm

Where is ET?

Ha!
shoot it real.

look! and see. Shoot and feel
User avatar
jethro
Senior Member
 
Posts: 1006
Joined: Tue Oct 26, 2004 10:03 pm
Location: down south, sydney

Re: Stars and Painting with Light

Postby SteveGriffin on Fri Mar 07, 2008 10:24 pm

I really like #2 but I with most of the others in thinking it would look even better with a bit of perspective correction.

Not sure what Matt has been using :shock:
Steve
-------------------------------------------------------
So many things to do - so little time.
User avatar
SteveGriffin
Senior Member
 
Posts: 815
Joined: Tue Feb 22, 2005 6:52 pm
Location: Rochedale Brisbane

Re: Stars and Painting with Light

Postby Justin on Sat Mar 08, 2008 7:22 am

Very good. Even a weak torch will do - on a 30s exposure you can even over-expose, it's quite a trick (the drainpipe in the first shot is burnt out). You could also try an SB800 manual flash (multiples, keep it going during the exposure) or pre-flash/strobe.

I like the effect with trees - pick one tree and highlight it during the exposure. I like the first shot with the milky way.
D3 | 18-200VR | 50:1.4 | 28:2.8 | 35-70 2.8 | 12-24 f4
picasaweb.google.com/JustinPhotoGallery
"We don't know and we don't care"
User avatar
Justin
Senior Member
 
Posts: 1089
Joined: Sun Apr 03, 2005 9:32 pm
Location: Newtown, Sydeny

Re: Stars and Painting with Light

Postby marcotrov on Sat Mar 08, 2008 7:43 pm

Great pair of images Matt. I particularly like the last. I think producing another image, as has been suggested, will produce an image with a different and more conventional image not necessarily btter. I think the convergence in your original image enhances the magic of space and time. Well done :)
cheers
marco
marcotrov
Senior Member
 
Posts: 2577
Joined: Mon Feb 28, 2005 2:21 pm
Location: Cairns, Queensland, Australia

Re: Stars and Painting with Light

Postby MATT on Sun Mar 09, 2008 2:30 am

Thanks to all for the feed back..I ve been away from the PC for a few days and will look into straighening those buildings.. The 10-20 has that effect at 10mm.

Bring on winter when the nights are even clearer..

MATT
User avatar
MATT
Senior Member
 
Posts: 1748
Joined: Sat Oct 23, 2004 8:24 pm
Location: Biloela, QLD-----nikon--D700-----

Re: Stars and Painting with Light

Postby stubbsy on Mon Mar 10, 2008 8:54 pm

Matt K wrote:Don't listen to Stubbsy, he is a compulsive obsessive! Buildings don't have to be vertically correct. Stick your head between your legs and look at the world. Is it all geometrically corrected? Of course not. Is it a valid view of the world? Of course it is. Your pics are great just as they are. Peter....relax....try some recreational drugs....let go. :D :D :D


Matt K - you crack me up sometimes and this is one of them :lol:

And what's wrong with being obsessive anyway :roll:
Peter
Disclaimer: I know nothing about anything.
*** smugmug galleries: http://www.stubbsy.smugmug.com ***
User avatar
stubbsy
Moderator
 
Posts: 10748
Joined: Wed Dec 08, 2004 7:44 pm
Location: Newcastle NSW - D700

Re: Stars and Painting with Light

Postby whoalse on Wed Mar 12, 2008 9:01 pm

Got to agree with the rest I love the 2nd!
we dwellers are the insignificant beings in the universe!

great work you have!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
whoALSE => Allen
One form of time travel is thru Captured Moments
User avatar
whoalse
Member
 
Posts: 109
Joined: Fri Dec 07, 2007 5:14 pm
Location: Richmond, VIC


Return to Image Reviews and Critiques