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Re: Into the Great Unknownhmmm the image is a bit dark and the person a bit small. It definitely conveys the "unknown" though
Re: Into the Great UnknownI like it just the way it is, well almost I'd clone out the little boat on the horizon as I find it distracting from the theme and composition of the shot. Well done.
Re: Into the Great UnknownThe first spot my eye went to was the cloud, and then i figured by the name of the photo there was something else there. It took me a second to see the guy. Maybe try and get rid of the big cloud?
Re: Into the Great UnknownI am not sure about this one as there is something bothering m,e that I cannot put my finger on. Certainly it is a little dark and yes I almost had to look for the surfer. Perhaps if the surfer was positioned more prominently.
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Re: Into the Great UnknownI like this Nigell, it is very remiscent of the arty photography we saw in the late seventies (and that
is meant as a complement, not a criticism!!) I wouldn't change anything either. I think the strength is, at least partly, in the proportions. Well done Greg - - - - D200 etc
Talent hits a target no one else can hit; Genius hits a target no one else can see. - Arthur Schopenhauer
Re: Into the Great UnknownThanks for the comments. I tend to be an arty guy so most of my stuff has an artistic lend to it. So I will take the "70s" comment
Re: Into the Great UnknownI like it with the proportions and look as is, but I'd probably clone out the mast on the horizon as well.
Other than that, I think it conveys the title well. cheers, juice
http://www.flickr.com/photos/mickeyjuice/ A bunch of Canon stuff (including Canon & Sigma lenses). Way more gear than talent.
Re: Into the Great UnknownNigell, I'm a bit undecided about this one. I like it but I think what I would like to see is the surfer on the left so that he is not sailing out of the photo, but then I think the white cloud in the left top balances the surfer on the bottom right.
So I came up with this, I hope you don't mind. __________
Phillip **Nikon D7000**
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