Portrait of Kids

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Portrait of Kids

Postby whoalse on Fri Mar 14, 2008 6:54 pm

Took these over the past couple of weeks. Comments are very much welcomed (flames too :cough: )....
Thanks for looking. :cheers:

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Re: Portrait of Kids

Postby photohiker on Fri Mar 14, 2008 8:40 pm

Hi

Number 2 is precious, and it's my pick.

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Re: Portrait of Kids

Postby phoenix on Fri Mar 14, 2008 9:00 pm

Number two is my favourite too. I would love to see it with a darker background and then i think it would be prefect, but it's really really nice. Great job! :D
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Re: Portrait of Kids

Postby rcg on Fri Mar 14, 2008 9:21 pm

I like them all but I particularly think the last one is great
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Re: Portrait of Kids

Postby Marvin on Sat Mar 15, 2008 12:35 am

Numbers 2 and 4 for me. Love the facial expression in the last. The first doesn't seem an entirely natural facial expression, and I'll admit, I'm not much a fan of tilted pictures.
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Re: Portrait of Kids

Postby whoalse on Sat Mar 15, 2008 8:17 am

Hi Phoenix, will take note on the 2nd pic making the background a tad darker.

It's a coincidence that I managed to captured this shot of a friend's newborn during my holiday trip.

Hi all,
THanks for the constructive comments. Really help
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Re: Portrait of Kids

Postby whoalse on Sat Mar 15, 2008 11:41 am

Ooops...missed out this one, Marvin.

The little girl was playing with the horsie toy and definitely a candid with a slight movement at her left eye! The expression does look a little unnatural but it's definitely a candid.

Thanks for your comments......
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Re: Portrait of Kids

Postby whoalse on Sat Mar 15, 2008 11:46 am

Another thing is I initially tried the full colour and BW version but both didn't really pull my attentions. So, I tried the selective stripping of the background colours to catch the eyes of the viewers.

Any comments on this method? Pros and Cons?
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Re: Portrait of Kids

Postby zafra52 on Sat Mar 15, 2008 4:34 pm

I like them all! Specially because getting children to look natural is so difficult and you need to be ready and watching for that magic moment. However, I think your last picture could do with a little more contrast.
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Re: Portrait of Kids

Postby Mrs Reschsmooth on Sun Mar 16, 2008 8:11 pm

the last one is my pick. :D It's great - bright, cheerful and cheeky!
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Re: Portrait of Kids

Postby Pehpsi on Sun Mar 16, 2008 8:31 pm

Beautiful series of shots. Can't go past #4 as a favourite.. :)
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