Holly by the sea edge

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Holly by the sea edge

Postby Flash in the pan on Wed Mar 19, 2008 12:04 pm

Hi all
I spent a few nights down at Robe (SA Coast) with the family and quickly grabbed this shot (D80) of my oldest (4) daughter playing by the freezing sea.
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I have spent an hour trying to crop and you can see the original below. I think this is the best solution. I really wanted to keep as much of the light reflections in but the distant breakwater and horizon seemed to distract. what do you think?

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Re: Holly by the sea edge

Postby sirhc55 on Wed Mar 19, 2008 12:23 pm

This photo, represented as two versions, has credit in both directions. The cropped version gives the viewer a sense of total isolation, which I like. The full shot is also commendable because, IMO, it still shows isolation but of a different type. The sense of nearby humanity enhances the sense of connection even when isolated. I like both versions.
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Re: Holly by the sea edge

Postby Marvin on Wed Mar 19, 2008 5:09 pm

I prefer the cropped version. I think the focus is more on Holly than on the area around her.
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Re: Holly by the sea edge

Postby Oneputt on Wed Mar 19, 2008 5:45 pm

I really like the uncropped version and echo Chris's comments.
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Re: Holly by the sea edge

Postby Flash in the pan on Thu Mar 20, 2008 10:44 am

...now I feel better about spending an hour trying to crop it. There doesn't seem to be an absolute solution to crop or not to crop!

Thanks anyway for the input.
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