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Three Sides to Every Story

Postby Manta on Fri Feb 18, 2005 8:00 pm

A shot of the Tropical House at Brisbane's Mt Coot-tha Botanical Gardens, levels adjusted and some diffuse glow added.

I couldn't resist calling it "Three Sides to Every Story".

Appreciate any comments you may have. :D

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Postby Glen on Fri Feb 18, 2005 8:04 pm

Simon, it is like one of those puzzle pictures, very interesting
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Postby christiand on Fri Feb 18, 2005 8:10 pm

Very interesting subject very nicely photographed.
I like it a lot.

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Postby Manta on Fri Feb 18, 2005 8:11 pm

Thanks Glen and CD for your comments. Here's the original for comparison. I only took the shot with a view to using the geometry later...

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Postby sirhc55 on Fri Feb 18, 2005 8:12 pm

2 S’s - superb Simon
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Postby Manta on Fri Feb 18, 2005 8:13 pm

sirhc55 wrote:2 S’s - superb Simon


Gee, I'm blushing here...
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Postby leek on Fri Feb 18, 2005 8:29 pm

An excellent shot Manta...
I also prefer the processed version - What steps did you take in PP???
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Postby Manta on Fri Feb 18, 2005 8:51 pm

Hey John - nice to hear from you (and on the very day I did a maintenance check on "Hard Rock" too!)

I was in a bit of a hurry with this one so I basically did a very slight crop, a levels adjustment, some slight cloning to get rid of a few annoying reflections and then the default Diffuse Glow filter settings.

I had originally taken the shot thinking it would make a good black and White study and just ran the diffuse glow out of curiosity. When it came up okay I decided to keep it.

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Postby phillipb on Fri Feb 18, 2005 9:05 pm

Simon,
I may be going against the trend here, I like them both, but I really don't find the reflections annoying, if anything they add interest as you tend to go past the triangular shapes and look further into the picture.
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Postby Manta on Fri Feb 18, 2005 9:32 pm

phillipb wrote:Simon,
I may be going against the trend here, I like them both, but I really don't find the reflections annoying, if anything they add interest as you tend to go past the triangular shapes and look further into the picture.
Well done.


Good point Phillip. The postioning of the reflections in the corners of the triangles helped a lot too, allowing the view from the inside to come out.
I like both shots but prefer the processed as as the surface seems opaque rather than translucent, making the inside view look like a reflection of something outside.

The 'annoying' relfection I was talking about was that line of bright dots in the bottom left corner - they just didn't fit in with the rest of the image. Another one I cloned out was a leaf that was a bit bright in the lower centre.
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Postby stubbsy on Fri Feb 18, 2005 9:50 pm

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Superb - I prefer the PP version as I think you focus more on the geometric nature of the image.
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Postby Manta on Fri Feb 18, 2005 10:03 pm

stubbsy wrote:Simon

Superb - I prefer the PP version as I think you focus more on the geometric nature of the image.


Yeah...it's pretty hard to miss, isn't it!
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Postby sirhc55 on Fri Feb 18, 2005 10:05 pm

I like both - I would even try experimenting with colourisation :wink:
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Postby phillipb on Fri Feb 18, 2005 10:09 pm

sirhc55 wrote:I like both - I would even try experimenting with colourisation :wink:


By that do you mean each triangle in a different colour?
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Postby Manta on Fri Feb 18, 2005 10:11 pm

I've tried some colour variations and will post some soon. :)
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Postby Manta on Fri Feb 18, 2005 10:49 pm

Heavily saturated version:

I duplicated the background, ran a red/blue gradient, twist filter, overlay blend mode. This 'swirled' the colour and saved having to colour individual segments.

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Postby sirhc55 on Fri Feb 18, 2005 10:56 pm

Wow! :P :P :P :P
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Postby Glen on Fri Feb 18, 2005 11:01 pm

Manta , really like the saturated version, sort of sci fi
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Postby flipfrog on Sat Feb 19, 2005 5:07 am

Manta

i really love this pic (the first version)
nice shapes, lines, composition, and pattern...
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Postby stubbsy on Sat Feb 19, 2005 6:25 am

Manta

Love the colour version. One thing though is it looks less like a photo and more like an illustration. Not sure if this is a good thing or a bad thing :?
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Postby the foto fanatic on Sat Feb 19, 2005 6:47 am

I think the colour adds a new dimension.
IMHO the original is the weakest of the pix, although the pattern of the triangles had potential.
The latest version is quite striking.
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Postby Manta on Sat Feb 19, 2005 9:00 am

Thanks everyone for the positive comments.

I agree the colourised version has gone beyond a photograph and moved into a more graphical/illustrative area. I'm pleased some of you like it but I still prefer the first processed version. What is obvious here is that strong geometric shapes can lend themselves to all kinds of treatment and can either be embellished into highly stylised and abstract art or even softened and blended for less striking photographic uses.

I've also experimented with using this shot as a texture template and a lightened, desaturated version as a web page background.

Cheers all and thanks for making this shot my most talked-about yet!
(Doesn't say much for my other work, eh?!! :) )
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Postby dooda on Sat Feb 19, 2005 10:39 am

The first one is terrific. It lends focus on the shapes without totally eliminating the reflections and the inside of it. Much improved from the original. The PP'd one is good, but it is something you'd use for some specific Magazine assignment or something. I likey.
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