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Postby lavenlaar on Thu Mar 27, 2008 2:23 pm

Howdy all - noobie here !

Mostly shoot Motorsports lately and just published a book through blurb.com entitled MMVII for another pic website.
But recently getting more into the stop action of sports like League / Soccer / Cricket etc... i think the facial expressions do it for me !

Well heres a few pics - LAY IT ON ME ...
EASTERN CREEK 2008
This was my best image shot at 1/40th at f/20 - still a little soft
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Damn autofocus , but still turned out ok - a little different
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Rick Kelly
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Womens Ashes Tour 2008
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Re: New member

Postby lavenlaar on Thu Mar 27, 2008 2:24 pm

EDIT : fixed
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Re: New member

Postby mickeyjuice on Thu Mar 27, 2008 3:09 pm

It's four per thread, so better kill most of them, I reckon. (If you don't, a mod will.)
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Re: New member

Postby stubbsy on Thu Mar 27, 2008 3:35 pm

lavenlaar wrote:OOPS - just read the 4 images per post thing ... my Sony ... do you want me to split it up ?

LAV

It's not really about splitting things up rather it's about putting your best foot forward. Generally 4 images from a session should be more than enough for a review/critique if that's what you're after. For images beyond that just include a link to your gallery. So here you might include two motorsport and 2 cricket images for example and a link saying more here. If you have an entire gallery to show off there's another forum here called Gallery Updates in the members only area, but you don't have enough posts etc to qualify for that area yet.

Normally I'd just edit your post and remove all but the first 4 shots, but I'll give you a chance to choose your best photos first.
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Re: New member

Postby stubbsy on Thu Mar 27, 2008 6:03 pm

Brendan

Thanks for correcting the number of images in your post.

Looking at the images:
#1 - is way better than I can do panning since I'm not very good at it, but I think you've not quite nailed it with that one. The car is a touch blurred (unless that is what you were aiming for) and this detracts from the image for me. For motorsports images you can find some great examples here that have razor sharp cars and nice blurred backgrounds (images by Raskill & MattyO spring to mind, but there are plenty of others).
#2 - for an accident this one works for me. I can't explain why, but I like it
#3 - This one is the best of this set. It has what #1 lacks IMHO _ The foreground car is nice and sharp and the OOF background cars and blurred background give a good strong impression of speed.
#4 - I'm not sure about this one - it looks like a good action shot, but I can't see the ball. Perhaps this is apparent in a larger image.
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Re: New member

Postby mickeyjuice on Thu Mar 27, 2008 6:18 pm

I pretty much agree with Stubbsy - #3 for me. Good shutter speed, DOF, composition, sharpness.

IMHO, #4 is nothing special - for cricket I think you need to get CLOSE, which means a LONG lens. (One of my mates shoots for Gettys here in Perth, and has a 600/4, and has been known to use a TC on it.…)

Here's one I shot at the Twenty20 final at the WACA. (Sigma 120-300/2.8 with a 2xTC attached.)

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This obviously look better bigger, but I can't be bothered re-exporting it to get an 800 width, so 500 will have to do. And it weighs less :-)
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Re: New member

Postby lavenlaar on Thu Mar 27, 2008 9:39 pm

stubbsy wrote:Brendan

Thanks for correcting the number of images in your post.

no probs - only need asking once

Looking at the images:
#1 - is way better than I can do panning since I'm not very good at it, but I think you've not quite nailed it with that one. The car is a touch blurred (unless that is what you were aiming for) and this detracts from the image for me. For motorsports images you can find some great examples here that have razor sharp cars and nice blurred backgrounds (images by Raskill wow - amazing who you find in the "WWw" ... i know Raskill from our other place & MattyO spring to mind, but there are plenty of others). the 1/40th blurs the car even more and has a lower DoF - looks like its coming out of warp speed ;)
#2 - for an accident this one works for me. I can't explain why, but I like it i think its the tones in the pic, they blend nicely but can still make out the shape of the car and the track... well thats what i reckon
#3 - This one is the best of this set. It has what #1 lacks IMHO _ The foreground car is nice and sharp and the OOF background cars and blurred background give a good strong impression of speed.
#4 - I'm not sure about this one - it looks like a good action shot, but I can't see the ball. Perhaps this is apparent in a larger image.


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Re: New member

Postby Catcha on Fri Mar 28, 2008 4:43 pm

1st shot looks good would be better if it was more in focus, and 3rd shot looks spot on only needs to be bigger :wink:
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