Hiding The Sun

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Hiding The Sun

Postby Underload on Sun Mar 23, 2008 10:36 pm

This is an image, a HDR merge, from a recent trip to Mount Mee. It was late afternoon, and I'd been hoping for nice sunset, but it ended up being fairly harsh. A short drive on from where I'd planned to shoot from, and I found this place.

C&C appreciated :)

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Re: Hiding The Sun

Postby antman on Sun Mar 23, 2008 10:51 pm

Great shot. Doesn't look obviously HDR to me. Lovely colours, tones and composition.

I'd be tempted to crop a bit off the left of the image as the branches of the other tree are a little distracting.

Other than that I think it's terrific.
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Re: Hiding The Sun

Postby surenj on Mon Mar 24, 2008 2:39 am

What a great shot!!! Well done. Agree with the left crop...
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Re: Hiding The Sun

Postby sheepie on Mon Mar 24, 2008 9:18 am

Interesting shot - nice use of HDR in this one. Agree on the suggestions of a crop off the lhs, maybe as far as taking the first fence post out? I'd also experiment with taking some of the foreground out with a crop off the bottom - perhaps up as far as the top of that first post.

It's all a matter of personal preference really - I get drawn towards pano crops with landscapes, others don't. Well done on making the effort to get a shot others (including myself) probably wouldn't even try to get :)

As an aside, I'm really liking some of the work that's being done in HDR on this site lately. Unlike some of the earlier work we saw (where there was a tendancy to push every extreme possible), I think there's a move to more subtlety in the images.
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Re: Hiding The Sun

Postby Alex on Mon Mar 24, 2008 9:28 am

Excellent landscape. I love your HDR work. Many HDR images look just a bit too fake, but this one has a very believable look.

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Re: Hiding The Sun

Postby Geoff on Mon Mar 24, 2008 1:13 pm

This is a beautiful shot, I think the HDR has been implemented really well. Congrats.
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Re: Hiding The Sun

Postby sirhc55 on Mon Mar 24, 2008 1:26 pm

Stunning
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Re: Hiding The Sun

Postby Pehpsi on Mon Mar 24, 2008 3:55 pm

Very very nice :) Great colour/light.
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Re: Hiding The Sun

Postby dodge on Mon Mar 24, 2008 4:05 pm

Very nice indeed :D
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Re: Hiding The Sun

Postby TC on Mon Mar 24, 2008 5:14 pm

that's just beautiful.
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Re: Hiding The Sun

Postby Underload on Tue Mar 25, 2008 11:41 am

Thanks for the comments and suggestions :D I'll definitely have a go at the alternate crops, to see if it improves the image a bit more. Thanks again! :D
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Re: Hiding The Sun

Postby Finch on Sat Mar 29, 2008 10:43 pm

Hi James

This shot is absolutely beautiful.

Very, very nice :D

Cheers

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Re: Hiding The Sun

Postby BBJ on Sat Mar 29, 2008 11:56 pm

Nice pic, well done and this is something i have not been able to work out this HDR, had a lil read and a play but beyond me.
Oneday i will work it out, and give it a try.

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Re: Hiding The Sun

Postby whoalse on Sun Mar 30, 2008 10:06 am

Agree on the crop bit. I can see an orange spot near the branches centre left. Perhaps cloning it off may reduce the distraction (at least to my eyes).

Love the shot esp it just doesn't look like a HDR. Thanks for sharing too.
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Re: Hiding The Sun

Postby robert on Sun Mar 30, 2008 8:22 pm

Inspirational!!
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Re: Hiding The Sun

Postby CoryH on Sun Mar 30, 2008 9:33 pm

Fantastic!!
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