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Some Glasses.Here are a couple of shots i have completed for my photography course, this semester specialising in glassware/chrome.
am interested to know what y'all think. http://flickr.com/photos/jamesthomsonphotography/
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Re: Some Glasses.beautiful...is the first one taken with two softboxes and photoshopped table?
Re: Some Glasses.Not sure about the background in shot #1
Outher than that very nice Cheers Cobby
Re: Some Glasses.the first is taken with a large softbox behind the background with a piece of red card infront of it with the cloth on top. the softbox is larger than the card so you end up with the rim lighting on the edges of the glass.
second was taken on a 6ft mirror with the biggest softbox i could find pointed down 45deg behind the glass, the only things you see in shot are the mirror and the glass with water. no photoshop on these besides corrections like levels whitebalance finetuning the exposure and in the second cloning out the water on the mirror that splashed out of the glass. http://flickr.com/photos/jamesthomsonphotography/
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Re: Some Glasses.I really like the second one, I like the lighting in the first, but not overly keen on the tabletop or the background.
Re: Some Glasses.Mate, they are brilliant. The second one is really striking. What kind of course are you doing?... like more specifically than 'photography' (before anyone says it ).
Matt
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Re: Some Glasses.Bach design (photography) at CIT. (canberra institute of technology)
im in second year this year. http://flickr.com/photos/jamesthomsonphotography/
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Re: Some Glasses.Thommo I agree with the others, your 2nd picture really stands out with the plain white background
Hope to see more of your pics through out your course
Re: Some Glasses.Lovely, I'm jealous. I've been trying to photograph glass with limited success for some time now. Looking at these, I think I need a bigger light source
The first one looks as if the glass is floating above the surface (courtesy of the shadow in front. Is this the intention, accidental, or just my eyes. Greg
It's easy to be good... when there is nothing else to do
Re: Some Glasses.2nd shot is great! Love the concept - simple yet very much striking!!
Well done!! Shorty
Re: Some Glasses.very nice contrast control in that second shot there mate! i like the idea of the mirror as well.
Nathan
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Re: Some Glasses.Not bad....I think the background in #1 is too strong and the grey table ruins the proportions of the composition. In #2 the fluid that runs off the top and bottom of the page weaken the composition a little. Your lighting is excellent.
Regards
Matt. K
Re: Some Glasses.
Thanks Matt, I struggled to get what i wanted in the first, i wanted the material to be out of focus and more a colour then a texture but because of where it was placed that was hard, Also i think the lighting on it could have been a bit better (this is an assesment piece), as there are some not so pleasent reflections on the edges. Also in the second every time i look at it i see the softbox through the glass, i find it sorta funny. http://flickr.com/photos/jamesthomsonphotography/
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