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Model Shoot: Tarah in the Workshop (NSFW)

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Model Shoot: Tarah in the Workshop (NSFW)

Postby MattyO on Thu Apr 10, 2008 12:34 am

Just a few from my latest shoot on sunday.

Comments and Criticisms are always welcome, as its how im going to get better!

Enjoy!

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Re: Model Shoot: Tarah in the Workshop

Postby Glen on Thu Apr 10, 2008 6:40 am

I am not sure if it is the lighting from the flame but love the last
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Re: Model Shoot: Tarah in the Workshop

Postby bwhinnen on Thu Apr 10, 2008 6:50 am

Whilst the second one is my favourite with her engaging eyes Vicki thinks the fourth one with the flame is the best.

Great work Matty, good to see you branching out into another themed shoot!
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Re: Model Shoot: Tarah in the Workshop

Postby Wocka on Thu Apr 10, 2008 9:27 am

I'd say No# 4 is the best.
No# 2 Love the eyes, But I'm not into the dirty look.
No# 1 is distracting to me with all the vertical lines not being vertical.

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Re: Model Shoot: Tarah in the Workshop (NSFW)

Postby surenj on Thu Apr 10, 2008 8:58 pm

nice lighting... Could I ask how you lit the first?
Fav is the last one for the pose, light and expression on her face...
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Re: Model Shoot: Tarah in the Workshop (NSFW)

Postby MattyO on Thu Apr 10, 2008 9:12 pm

there was a big softbox camera right, lighting the model and most of the car, and a ringflash just off to the left providing fill and a background light.

Nothing too fancy!
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Re: Model Shoot: Tarah in the Workshop (NSFW)

Postby mattyjacobs on Fri Apr 11, 2008 1:16 am

I know it's 'art' but I still can't help but wonder why she'd wrap that 'caution' tape around her boobs when using a burner.

I partly say that in jest ... but I still don't get it.

Well, I get the bit about showing a sexy girl provocatively hiding her boobs.
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Re: Model Shoot: Tarah in the Workshop (NSFW)

Postby Ghetto Panda on Sat Apr 12, 2008 11:27 pm

mattyjacobs wrote:I know it's 'art' but I still can't help but wonder why she'd wrap that 'caution' tape around her boobs when using a burner.


Well if your going to ask that then why not ask what is a girl working in a workshop doing wearing lingerie.
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Re: Model Shoot: Tarah in the Workshop (NSFW)

Postby !~DeViNe~DaRkNeSs~! on Sun Apr 13, 2008 2:05 pm

Wow thats a nice Cefiro :D
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