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Skate + MTB

Postby Nettheim on Sat Apr 12, 2008 2:39 pm

Still learning with flashes. C&C appricitated

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Re: Skate + MTB

Postby surenj on Sun Apr 13, 2008 10:19 am

Like the first and last the most.
1# - If you could, it would be nice to give the rider more space to move in to the left of the picture so it's more balanced but it's kinda appealing that way it is...
3# - nice use of two flashes for rim lighting
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Re: Skate + MTB

Postby jamesw on Sun Apr 13, 2008 11:40 am

solid last shot mate
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Re: Skate + MTB

Postby jdear_89 on Mon Apr 14, 2008 9:15 pm

#1 - I know this would be oober hard but if you could move the biker to the right a bit i think that it would hit the nail on the head - the pole behind him is a tad distracting,
#3 on the other hand has been beautifully executed - like the deep casted shadows coming from the flashes and the composure.
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