Simple automotive portrait

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Simple automotive portrait

Postby bwhinnen on Sun Apr 13, 2008 10:23 am

Taken in a darkened workshop. The only lights were the headlights and taillights of the car, the rest was painted with the flash on Manual 1/16th and me running around like a looney.

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Re: Simple automotive portrait

Postby CoryH on Sun Apr 13, 2008 1:53 pm

I just want one!
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Re: Simple automotive portrait

Postby Geoff on Sun Apr 13, 2008 2:21 pm

Brett - great outcome for a simple setup (even if you did look like a looney!) Well done.
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Re: Simple automotive portrait

Postby surenj on Sun Apr 13, 2008 5:58 pm

Nice shot! Could be improved by a little rim lighting if you could manage it.
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Re: Simple automotive portrait

Postby bwhinnen on Mon Apr 14, 2008 9:04 pm

Thanks guys, the rim lighting would have been good, but 10 seconds doesn't give you much time to get around the other side. Might have to have another go :) The area is just screaming for some studio lights and setup :)
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Re: Simple automotive portrait

Postby jdear_89 on Mon Apr 14, 2008 11:35 pm

Well they do say that red is faster...
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Re: Simple automotive portrait

Postby dodge on Tue Apr 15, 2008 8:20 am

bwhinnen wrote:Thanks guys, the rim lighting would have been good, but 10 seconds doesn't give you much time to get around the other side. Might have to have another go :) The area is just screaming for some studio lights and setup :)
I could stand on the other side with my flash :mrgreen:
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Re: Simple automotive portrait

Postby bwhinnen on Tue Apr 15, 2008 8:25 am

dodge wrote:
bwhinnen wrote:Thanks guys, the rim lighting would have been good, but 10 seconds doesn't give you much time to get around the other side. Might have to have another go :) The area is just screaming for some studio lights and setup :)
I could stand on the other side with my flash :mrgreen:


I was actually thinking that too :)
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Re: Simple automotive portrait

Postby digifrog on Tue Apr 15, 2008 9:30 am

NIKON's CLS flash system is wonderful for back lighting
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Re: Simple automotive portrait

Postby bwhinnen on Tue Apr 15, 2008 9:59 am

digifrog wrote:NIKON's CLS flash system is wonderful for back lighting


Flash was all manual, i.e. Camera set to 10sec f4.5 and then I run around painting the car with light with multiple flash outputs at 1/32 power.

If I had more than one flash then this would have been easier to achieve :)
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Re: Simple automotive portrait

Postby mark on Tue Apr 15, 2008 11:41 am

I like this shot.
Agree with the comments about the rim lighting, but hey we work with what we have. :wink:
Perhaps to improve this shot more, you could crop just to the right of the brick pillar on the left of frame. It would be tight on the back of the car, but the shadow fade on to black on the wall behind would pop the car more.
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Re: Simple automotive portrait

Postby bwhinnen on Tue Apr 15, 2008 11:47 am

Thanks for the suggestion Mark. I was looking at doing some dodging of the light spill from the number plate light at the rear, I could always darken the wall further to leave the crop a little looser and still keep the darker background. Might try that out tonight.
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Re: Simple automotive portrait

Postby ozimax on Tue Apr 15, 2008 12:00 pm

Good shot, nice car. BTW, is the glint in the headlight real or photoshopped in? Nice effect.

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Re: Simple automotive portrait

Postby bwhinnen on Tue Apr 15, 2008 12:11 pm

ozimax wrote:Good shot, nice car. BTW, is the glint in the headlight real or photoshopped in? Nice effect.

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Thanks Ozi, it is real, and I even remembered to take the UV filter off this time...
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Re: Simple automotive portrait

Postby ozimax on Tue Apr 15, 2008 12:45 pm

Cool Brett, I like glints, especially when you place one on someone's teeth or eyes, makes them look like a used car salesman...

Now, if only I could make my Magna look this cool... :)
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Re: Simple automotive portrait

Postby bwhinnen on Wed Apr 16, 2008 1:20 pm

Some dodging has been done.

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Re: Simple automotive portrait

Postby Catcha on Wed Apr 16, 2008 11:52 pm

Nice shot Brett !!! It just reminded me this arvo when I was taking a walk around Nightcliff Jetty and a guy was taking some shots of his mates Holden VE ute with the sunset in the back drop , with a tripod and flash :cheers:
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