First Wedding

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First Wedding

Postby rangie on Wed Apr 16, 2008 11:14 pm

I was lucky enough to shadow a photographer on a friends wedding. I am considering doing this as a full time gig... and this was a great opportuntiy to see what a day in the life of a wedding photog was like.

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Your feedback is appreciated!

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Re: First Wedding

Postby Marvin on Thu Apr 17, 2008 12:34 am

Hi Ben,
I can't see any of your images - I just get the word image.
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Re: First Wedding

Postby rangie on Thu Apr 17, 2008 8:47 am

I just changed the smugmug gallery to public, hopefully this fixes the problem...
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Re: First Wedding

Postby Bindii on Thu Apr 17, 2008 8:51 am

rangie wrote:I just changed the smugmug gallery to public, hopefully this fixes the problem...


Nope not working here either... have you tried 'photobucket'... thats the one I use.. its free and I've never had a problem with it.. :)
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Re: First Wedding

Postby rangie on Thu Apr 17, 2008 8:56 am

howcome I can see the images in the post, and no-one else can... technology can be very frustrating! :x

okay, I have reposted the images again, hopefully you can see them now.
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Re: First Wedding

Postby Bindii on Thu Apr 17, 2008 11:26 am

rangie wrote:howcome I can see the images in the post, and no-one else can... technology can be very frustrating! :x

okay, I have reposted the images again, hopefully you can see them now.


Oooh I know how frustrated you must be feeling.. and sorry to make it worse but I still can't see them..

if your desperate to get them up quickly.. you can email them to me suematic@hotmail.com and I can try posting them in this thread for you?.. :)
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Re: First Wedding

Postby Justin on Thu Apr 17, 2008 2:16 pm

It's probably because the post is cached.

Try posting them again, cut the links out and post a reply to the thread
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Re: First Wedding

Postby rangie on Thu Apr 17, 2008 3:01 pm

http://fewtrell.smugmug.com/gallery/473 ... 3771_eWvgg

this will link to the gallery i have them in. Can someone tell me what I have done wrong, i followed the steps in the 'how to embed images into a post'.
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Re: First Wedding

Postby devilla101 on Thu Apr 17, 2008 3:55 pm

Just took a look at your gallery. You didnt do too bad of a job. Some good PJ techniques there as well. Keep it up
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Re: First Wedding

Postby Marvin on Fri Apr 18, 2008 11:50 am

I had a look at the gallery too. I really like the 2nd one for the bright blue background and the colours in the flowers as well as the couple kissing. I would like to see the couple's faces brightened up a little in the first, they seem very sallow (I know it is sepia but the colour seems a bit yellow to me). I like the bridesmaid shot too but I have to say that I kept tilting my head to see how the girls looked, although admittedly I am not really a fan of the tilted shot.
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Re: First Wedding

Postby myarhidia on Fri Apr 18, 2008 4:19 pm

Must be something you've done, links appear to work fine.

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Re: First Wedding

Postby Big Red on Fri Apr 18, 2008 9:12 pm

they just don't seem to link :?:
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Re: First Wedding

Postby digitor on Fri Apr 18, 2008 11:20 pm

rangie wrote:... this was a great opportuntiy to see what a day in the life of a wedding photog was like.
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Your feedback is appreciated!

Ben


I wish I had that opportunity - but unfortunately I see nothing! :shock: :? :(

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