Before and After

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Before and After

Postby rangie on Mon Apr 21, 2008 6:55 pm

After some feedback I have tried to make some changes to these photos. Firstly, I have changed the white Balance in Capture NX, hopefully this is a better WB, it looks better on my monitor. Also, on the second image I have cropped to include their hand (i don't know what i was thinking when i cut them out?? *slaps self on forehead*) and tried my hand at cloning the distracting background out of the pic. I also tried to use the healing brush to remove wrinkles from under the womans eyes (notice I said tried, my first time with the healing brush, I think i need more practice with this)

Let me know your thoughts...

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Image #2

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Last edited by rangie on Mon Apr 21, 2008 10:04 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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Re: Before and After

Postby Oneputt on Mon Apr 21, 2008 6:58 pm

No images to be seen :shock:
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Re: Before and After

Postby ATJ on Mon Apr 21, 2008 7:20 pm

Looks like smugmug is blocking hot linking. If you right click the word image in each case, and click view image, but they won't display in the post.
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Re: Before and After

Postby rangie on Mon Apr 21, 2008 9:51 pm

This happened to me the other day too... I dont understand why my other post worked, and this one doesnt?

Does anyone else use smugmug that can help me? Maybe I am doing something wrong??
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Re: Before and After

Postby hamster on Mon Apr 21, 2008 10:16 pm

the skin in picture 1 is much too red.
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Re: Before and After

Postby Reschsmooth on Tue Apr 22, 2008 9:32 am

It looks to me that the "after" image No 1 has a magenta cast now, and the "after" image No 2 has even more of a cyan cast? I say this viewing them on a 5 colour monitor that wouldn't know what calibration is. :D
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Re: Before and After

Postby rangie on Tue Apr 22, 2008 1:00 pm

I think I will go back to my box....

Time to work out how to calibrate my monitor!
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