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just a portrait

Postby iposiniditos on Sat Mar 01, 2008 11:48 am

at a studio, but i didn't like the flashes,
so i shot her next to an ikea light :)

p.s. 85mm f1.4d is so f#in' great....... can't live without it.

thank you for your comments as always,
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Re: just a portrait

Postby Marvin on Sat Mar 01, 2008 12:52 pm

I love it. The only niggle I could see is that the nose looks slightly odd in the middle, but that could be my monitor as it's new and not calibrated yet.
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Re: just a portrait

Postby GK on Sat Mar 01, 2008 1:34 pm

cool portrait! Like the lighting, but would probably like to see more of her face/hair in focus.
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Re: just a portrait

Postby the foto fanatic on Sat Mar 01, 2008 2:01 pm

Beautiful girl! I love the selective focus.

The only aspect that I don't like is the wall on the LHS that close in on her towards the top of the image.
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Re: just a portrait

Postby Alex on Sat Mar 01, 2008 2:17 pm

Excellent composition, lighting and treatment!

Great work again!

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Re: just a portrait

Postby Matt. K on Sat Mar 01, 2008 5:26 pm

Gorgious! Just perfect!
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Re: just a portrait

Postby xerubus on Sat Mar 01, 2008 5:28 pm

This is a beautiful example of using shallow dof perfectly. You should be very proud, it's a lovely shot.
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Re: just a portrait

Postby iposiniditos on Sat Mar 01, 2008 9:03 pm

many thanks everyone.

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Re: just a portrait

Postby marcotrov on Sun Mar 02, 2008 9:10 am

Excellent portraits with good use of DOF
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Re: just a portrait

Postby whitey on Sun Mar 02, 2008 9:48 am

Fantastic. Love the light. Shots like this make me want to spend the day practicing portraiture with my D80 and 50mm F/1.8

Also makes me want a 85mm F/1.4 - damn lens lust
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Re: just a portrait

Postby zafra52 on Sun Mar 02, 2008 1:43 pm

Theodoros, thank you for sharing these images with us. I feel a bit awkward criticising your pictures for I have learned quite a lot from you so take my comments only as a different point of view. I feel the angle of the Ikea shade (if you hadn’t told us is an Ikea Lamp I would have thought it is a piece of paper, a curtain or a wall) a bit distracting so I would cut it out of the picture altogether or if this image is a crop of the original reframe it to give a context (e.g. appearing as a prop). The second image you almost have it and I believe the lamps shows a either a wall or as a lamp if you hadn’t cut the hand of the subject, so I would re-crop the image showing more of the hand or removing the fingers. The colour, sharpness of the eyes, and depth of field are all great.
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Re: just a portrait

Postby iposiniditos on Wed Apr 16, 2008 8:01 am

many thanks everyone and special thanks zafra for your suggestions!
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Re: just a portrait

Postby Catcha on Thu Apr 17, 2008 12:00 am

I now know why you can't live without that lens, superb shots, like the 2nd better than 1st but both shots are great
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Re: just a portrait

Postby iposiniditos on Tue Apr 22, 2008 10:45 am

thank you Catcha.
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Re: just a portrait

Postby skumar25 on Tue Apr 22, 2008 5:27 pm

Superb... in the second shot i would probably crop out the tips of her fingers...
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Re: just a portrait

Postby Matt. K on Tue Apr 22, 2008 8:37 pm

Just beautiful! Nicely done.
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Re: just a portrait

Postby devilla101 on Tue Apr 22, 2008 8:46 pm

A very beautiful portrait. Love the toned down color sepia effect and the simple expression of the child's face
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Re: just a portrait

Postby iposiniditos on Sat Apr 26, 2008 11:42 am

many thanks!
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