A Panorama

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A Panorama

Postby andrewt on Wed Apr 30, 2008 11:29 am

Panorama
The panorama was taken with an EOS 400d, 75-300mm, 1/125. 5 photos stitched together in photoshop, Added sepia tone. The beach in the photo is Woolgoolga Beach, which is just past Coffs Harbour.

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Feel free to comment on ways to improve, as it does help. Also please comment on what other things should be done to them in photoshop.
Last edited by andrewt on Wed Apr 30, 2008 11:50 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: A Panorama + Circular Quay

Postby sirhc55 on Wed Apr 30, 2008 11:43 am

As it stands Andrew I like this photo (read pano). A couple of points: why is the sea running off to the right? :wink: I would suggest straitening the horizon. I would also lighten the foreground to give more depth perspective.
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Re: A Panorama

Postby surenj on Wed Apr 30, 2008 11:33 pm

I would like to see the colour version.
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Re: A Panorama

Postby andrewt on Thu May 01, 2008 12:04 am

surenj wrote:I would like to see the colour version.


here you go.

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