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Pelican feeding time

Postby Francis on Sat May 10, 2008 12:13 am

At the Entrance . about an hour north of Sydney....

C & C most welcome
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Re: Pelican feeding time

Postby Marvin on Sat May 10, 2008 9:17 am

I think the crop is good and there are lots of things to look at. I do think the vignetting is a little strong.
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Re: Pelican feeding time

Postby mansunzz on Sat May 10, 2008 12:56 pm

nice shot, the gradient forces the middle focus. Nice crop.
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Re: Pelican feeding time

Postby stubbsy on Sat May 10, 2008 12:59 pm

Francis. I'm with Marvin on this. The overdone vignetting really detracts from an otherwise well done image.
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Re: Pelican feeding time

Postby mikephotog on Sat May 10, 2008 2:56 pm

Also love the cropping. I vote for the vingnette, but maybe knock it back just a little.
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Re: Pelican feeding time

Postby surenj on Sat May 10, 2008 9:14 pm

Nice shot! I agree with the others on the vignette
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Re: Pelican feeding time

Postby Francis on Sat May 10, 2008 10:39 pm

Thanks for the comments. haven't had time yet but will certainly have a look at it without the vignette...
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