Sunrise at Shorncliffe

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Sunrise at Shorncliffe

Postby Manta on Sat May 10, 2008 11:12 pm

I'm not quite back from the dead but it may seem that way! Thought I'd better dust off the gear and what nicer way to do so than to go chasing sunrises. This was just to the left of said celestial body and the light was gorgeous...

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Re: Sunrise at Shorncliffe

Postby Bindii on Tue May 13, 2008 1:33 pm

Jesus... a sunrise! Did you wet the bed or something Simon?..

Well worth the effort of getting up and taking it though... its stunning.. the colours are very subtle but so pretty (yes yes.. that was a girly thing to say wasn't it?).. I hope that you have enlarged and framed this one.. :)
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Re: Sunrise at Shorncliffe

Postby Bindii on Tue May 13, 2008 1:44 pm

And oh yeah...

about time you showed your face here again mister!!! :|
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Re: Sunrise at Shorncliffe

Postby mansunzz on Tue May 13, 2008 7:14 pm

stunning shot, love the reflection from the water, is it cropped or pano software?
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Re: Sunrise at Shorncliffe

Postby surenj on Tue May 13, 2008 11:27 pm

Nice colours and crop but would like to see some more forground interest..
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Re: Sunrise at Shorncliffe

Postby Shoot on Tue May 13, 2008 11:41 pm

Wow Simon, I really like this shot. Such a different perspective to what I would have chosen with regards to the wall / wharf almost cutting the frame in half... That's a top shot mate!
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Re: Sunrise at Shorncliffe

Postby CraigVTR on Wed May 14, 2008 12:46 pm

Great shot Simon. The composition and colours are fantastic. I would like to see it a little lighter on the rhs to show a bit more detail. :D
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Re: Sunrise at Shorncliffe

Postby gstark on Wed May 14, 2008 1:23 pm

Manta wrote:what nicer way to do so than to go chasing sunrises.


Clearly not quite back from the dead. :)

Lovely shot, Simon. Perfect as it is.
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Re: Sunrise at Shorncliffe

Postby Manta on Wed May 14, 2008 8:23 pm

Wow - thanks all. This was a crop and, in response tp surenj, I initially had some exposed rocks in the foreground. However, they just weren't 'right' and I found my eye naturally drawn to to wall and light beyond. Tough call to trim it so dramatically but it seems it was the right thing to do. I got a a large foamboard-mounted print of it (a'la RedBubble) and it's sitting beside me as I type..... just waiting for me to decide which room it should go in.

Craig - this resized and compressed version has turned out significantly darker than the original which shows more detail in the trees. :D
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