Crater Falls - Cradle Mountain Nat Park

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Crater Falls - Cradle Mountain Nat Park

Postby radar on Thu May 15, 2008 7:18 pm

It's taken me a while to get my Cradle Mountain trip shots processed but here is the first one of many. Life sort of set aside my PP time but got a bit of time this afternoon. This was taken over the Anzac long-weekend. As you would expect in that wonderful part of the world, there was a fair bit of rain so the water was a bit more brown then usual. There are multiple levels to these falls and this is just a little section of them.

Nikon D200, Tokina 12-24 at 19mm f/16, 15 sec, tripod, a slight crop.

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Let me know what you think,

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Re: Crater Falls - Cradle Mountain Nat Park

Postby Bindii on Thu May 15, 2008 7:43 pm

The water looks lovely.. as does the mossy rocks in the backgrounds.. I feel that the composition with the large rock in the foreground is letting it down slightly though.. :)
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Re: Crater Falls - Cradle Mountain Nat Park

Postby phillipb on Thu May 15, 2008 8:46 pm

Bindii wrote:The water looks lovely.. as does the mossy rocks in the backgrounds.. I feel that the composition with the large rock in the foreground is letting it down slightly though.. :)


I agree, the rock is a bit too prominent. Try covering the bottom with your hand to create a pano, I think it improves it.
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Re: Crater Falls - Cradle Mountain Nat Park

Postby robert on Thu May 15, 2008 10:57 pm

I tend to think as a whole it is missing a little something..

There are really two strong elements- as another option I think it may be two pics in one. A vertical line to right of the waterfall making it as if in portait orientation with a bottom crop at the gathered twigs on left, and then a squarish crop of the eddy and its background. Just a thought.

That mossy bank and tannin creek is my goal to get a good image from someday. Is crater falls a day trip from the car park or a few days in?

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Re: Crater Falls - Cradle Mountain Nat Park

Postby surenj on Thu May 15, 2008 11:00 pm

Agree with the others, however you could clone that rock out I reckon...especially if you have other shots with water flowing towards you, one could replace the rock.....
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Re: Crater Falls - Cradle Mountain Nat Park

Postby ozimax on Fri May 16, 2008 6:08 am

I actually like the rock Andre, makes it a little different. I've walked thru CMNP numerous times, but not for over 20 years. I need to get back there.

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Re: Crater Falls - Cradle Mountain Nat Park

Postby radar on Fri May 16, 2008 9:47 am

Thanks for the comments, much appreciated. I've got a few variations, so I'll try a different combos.

Robert, Crater Falls are a comfortable 20 minutes walk from the Ronny Creek car park or about 30-40 minutes from the Dove Lake carpark, so quite easy to get to.

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Re: Crater Falls - Cradle Mountain Nat Park

Postby who on Fri May 16, 2008 5:30 pm

I like it.

The water is normally very brown from the tannins up there, I wouldn't say your shot is more brown than the norm.
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Re: Crater Falls - Cradle Mountain Nat Park

Postby photohiker on Sun May 18, 2008 10:08 am

Agree regarding the rock's prominence.

Andre, did you take any others at faster shutter speeds? I've had good results with the whirlpooling foam at a few seconds (depends on the speed of the whirlpool - I try to make the rotating bubbles into discontinuous 'streaks') long exposures blur the water and foam into continuous mist - still looks ok, but I think people find the effect of shorter exposures more engaging.

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