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Randoms

Postby norbs on Wed May 21, 2008 12:16 pm

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Re: Randoms

Postby PiroStitch on Wed May 21, 2008 12:20 pm

nice work Norbs. Particularly like the composition in #2.
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Re: Randoms

Postby stubbsy on Wed May 21, 2008 8:56 pm

#2 is awesome - great colours and lines - well spotted and framed
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Re: Randoms

Postby surenj on Wed May 21, 2008 9:20 pm

Love the idea in one and four. You could have sneaked in and used the flash on the person on 4 so they appear sharper
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Re: Randoms

Postby Geoff on Wed May 21, 2008 9:54 pm

These are all great Norbs but my personal fave is no.4...surreal!
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Re: Randoms

Postby the foto fanatic on Wed May 21, 2008 11:37 pm

I think #2 is excellent. :)
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Re: Randoms

Postby norbs on Wed May 21, 2008 11:52 pm

surenj wrote:Love the idea in one and four. You could have sneaked in and used the flash on the person on 4 so they appear sharper


That person was actually the one taking the photos :)

Thanks for the comments.
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Re: Randoms

Postby Pehpsi on Thu May 22, 2008 12:35 am

I think they're all good! 1&3 are my faves though. Great tones throughout.
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Re: Randoms

Postby Wocka on Thu May 22, 2008 9:42 am

No# 1 is fantastic.
I lone the headlights in and tail lights out effect.

No#4 if anything I'd make the person darker so you can't see the ocean through him.

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