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My Girls

Postby Geoff M on Sat Jul 05, 2008 10:16 am

Shots of my two daughters. Used the 60mm f2.8 Micro on the D70s with SB800 bounced off the side wall. Processed in LR.

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Re: My Girls

Postby devilla101 on Sat Jul 05, 2008 10:19 am

Beautiful portraits. Nice and simple.

Really nice how you process them as well
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Re: My Girls

Postby Matt. K on Sat Jul 05, 2008 6:24 pm

Charming high key images. Your processing is interesting and effective. Good job.
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Re: My Girls

Postby Willy wombat on Sat Jul 05, 2008 7:17 pm

Lovely clean and simple high key work
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Re: My Girls

Postby surenj on Sat Jul 05, 2008 7:43 pm

Perfect high key! Wish more of the neck was included in the second.
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Re: My Girls

Postby Shoot on Sat Jul 05, 2008 7:51 pm

Really like both of these images, well shot, and well processed!
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Re: My Girls

Postby chrisk on Sat Jul 05, 2008 11:11 pm

love em and love the treatment you used.
curious, do their poses reflect their personalities ? cos it comes thru quite strongly in the images.
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Re: My Girls

Postby Geoff M on Sun Jul 06, 2008 9:26 pm

Rooz wrote:curious, do their poses reflect their personalities ? cos it comes thru quite strongly in the images.


I suppose they do really, although as with most kids they can be angels one minute and the complete opposite the next :evil: :D

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Re: My Girls

Postby Benny2707 on Mon Jul 07, 2008 11:04 pm

I like the second one but it looks alittle over exposed even in this style of PP

great shots though
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Re: My Girls

Postby Catcha on Mon Jul 07, 2008 11:25 pm

Very nice shots, nice and simple
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Re: My Girls

Postby karenkwan on Wed Jul 09, 2008 4:11 am

I love the processing, it captures their innocence and happiness as young children :) I love how we can also take a small glimpse into their personalities in each of the photos
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