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Eastern Creek 2

Postby Jase555 on Sun Jul 13, 2008 10:54 pm

2nd day experience taking some motorsport fotos. Comments please on these few...

Lotus @ 1/180
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Superkart @ 1/250
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lonely...
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Prayers...
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Re: Eastern Creek 2

Postby Raskill on Sun Jul 13, 2008 11:16 pm

Really like the last two, they have a nice journalistic feel to them. For 'lonely' I would have been tempted to have the driver in focus, humanising the image, rather than the kart. Nice eye though. Papal visit cracks me up. Well done. :)
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Re: Eastern Creek 2

Postby hrpremier on Mon Jul 14, 2008 1:14 pm

Images 3 and 4 for me also.

As a kart racer for over 20 years I can relate to the 3rd picture. Its such a lonely feeling sitting on the infield waiting for the rest to finish.The only hting worse is sitting there with the bloke you just wiped out with you while u wait. lol. I also love the shot of the damaged car. I know after you fail to finish from experience its hard to have a positive attitude let alone a sense of humor and full marks to you for capturing such an interesting and real image. Overall a great effort and you should be proud of your results. Kepp the posts a coming.

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Re: Eastern Creek 2

Postby antman on Mon Jul 14, 2008 1:22 pm

The last one looks like a Ferrari. Wonder how much that's going to cost to get fixed.
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