Chelsea Portrait

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Chelsea Portrait

Postby devilla101 on Mon Jul 14, 2008 8:17 pm

Well I had a great day of shooting yesterday morning with a friend.

Initially I had an idea in mind of what I wanted to create and certain location of where I wanted it staged, but due to outside factors I threw up my hands and left the look and location to my friend.
In other words going in blind with no plan in mind and making do on the 'spontaneity' of the day.

As with the previous portrait shoot, again I kept the equipment to a bare minimum. A couple of cameras and 3 lenses (70-200, 17-55 and 16-35), and thats all. No special lighting equipment or modifiers.



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Re: Chelsea Portrait

Postby Dave-D40 on Mon Jul 14, 2008 8:32 pm

Great shots love the work, just wish i was creative enuff to take shots like yours :up:
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Re: Chelsea Portrait

Postby W00DY on Mon Jul 14, 2008 9:57 pm

Ron,

These are great mate, I really like them.

I could be wrong (and it could be my eyes?) but the first one looks like the softening effect on her face may have been applied slightly over her left eye as well? the right eye looks a little sharper, do you think? Otherwise I love this one :up: reminds me of a fashion advert I once saw (can not remember the brand though?)

The second one looks good but the oval on the tram behind her head is a little distracting in my mind. Also a great big laughing smile would have worked well in this shot I think?

The third does not do too much for me, too much nostril :) I like the composition but maybe just slightly to low?

What a shame the pipe is there in the 4th!!! the floor on this one is awesome, I like the pose, but the pipe....

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Re: Chelsea Portrait

Postby jethro on Mon Jul 14, 2008 10:15 pm

Ron,
You are the ultimate professional. Your design is of 1st class degree. Everything about your portifolio is of the highest standard and is to be admired. These images and your imaging style leave a lot of envy. Congrats on a truly professional approach to ones own desire to promote and achieve.
keep it up.
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Re: Chelsea Portrait

Postby Willy wombat on Mon Jul 14, 2008 10:24 pm

Some nice framing at these unstaged locations. You have done very well. I like them all
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Re: Chelsea Portrait

Postby carla_d on Tue Jul 15, 2008 5:06 am

these are great. nice use of vignetting.
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Re: Chelsea Portrait

Postby devilla101 on Tue Jul 15, 2008 9:21 am

Thanks for the comments guys.

Andrew: As for the distractions....well now that you pointed them out, yeah now they're distracting ;) Good eyes. Might have to visit them and get rid of those, although I can't believe I totally miss the pipe coming behind her, ugh! Such an unforgivable mistake!! Thanks for the critique mate, appreciate it.

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Re: Chelsea Portrait

Postby PiroStitch on Tue Jul 15, 2008 3:03 pm

Nice work :) Love how each of the pics pack a punch.
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Re: Chelsea Portrait

Postby wendellt on Thu Jul 17, 2008 12:16 am

hi ronald great work i like the feeling in all shots
but the 1st two work best it's natural capturted perfectly

how did you get to shoot at carriage works, everytime i shoot there security guards chase me away
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Re: Chelsea Portrait

Postby devilla101 on Thu Jul 17, 2008 7:04 pm

Thanks Piro

Wendellt: Thanks pal. Well we just rocked up there. Ummm I don't know if its because we kept a low profile and didn't have gear with us that screamed "Photo Shoot" but we did have security personnel pass us by throughout the 2.5 hour shoot and one even walked passed us, smiled and said hi. Yeah so maybe we just go lucky?
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Re: Chelsea Portrait

Postby surenj on Thu Jul 17, 2008 11:58 pm

Awesome set!!
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Re: Chelsea Portrait

Postby Catcha on Fri Jul 18, 2008 2:06 am

:agree: great shots
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