Kameraltı Pazar

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Kameraltı Pazar

Postby carla_d on Tue Jul 15, 2008 5:04 am

I'm spending some time in Izmir, a city on the south west coast of Turkey, and enjoying the photographic opportunities :)
Here are a couple of shots taken at the Kameraltı marketplace - which is a bit like Paddy's on steroids.

This man was kind enough to let me photograph him as he kicked back and enjoyed an afternoon cigarette.

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Re: Kameraltı Pazar

Postby bwhinnen on Tue Jul 15, 2008 8:00 am

Love the images, the lighting on the first is really good, it just really works over the whole image. I also like it more than the second one due to the candid feel that we are getting a peek into his world without his knowledge.
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Re: Kameraltı Pazar

Postby carla_d on Tue Jul 15, 2008 11:09 am

thanks bwinnen. there's a couple of hot-spots on the first that i couldn't reduce fully in post. not sure if they're distracting or not. but, yeah, the candid feel of the first is nice - though, of course, after i'd made my presence known, i had to ask him to look away from the camera. he actually thought i was asking him to move out of frame (my turkish isn't so good...)
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Re: Kameraltı Pazar

Postby sirhc55 on Tue Jul 15, 2008 11:55 am

Excellent shots Carla. I actually put #2 at the head as that gentleman has a definitive cheeky look :)
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Re: Kameraltı Pazar

Postby Glen on Tue Jul 15, 2008 12:11 pm

Welcome Carla, both have a very nice feel for the reasons stated above. I prefer the composition of the first. Look forward to seeing more images from your trip.
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Re: Kameraltı Pazar

Postby Greg B on Tue Jul 15, 2008 1:18 pm

Great shots Carla, very nice work. Looking forward to seeing more of your photos.
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Re: Kameraltı Pazar

Postby PiroStitch on Tue Jul 15, 2008 3:02 pm

great stuff Carla. Love the composition of the second pic, is that the original crop or did you re-crop it as his hand is a bit tight to the right side of the image. Otherwise brilliant
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Re: Kameraltı Pazar

Postby carla_d on Tue Jul 15, 2008 6:00 pm

PiroStitch wrote:great stuff Carla. Love the composition of the second pic, is that the original crop or did you re-crop it as his hand is a bit tight to the right side of the image. Otherwise brilliant

Thanks PiroStich!
Yes, i did re-crop, and didn't notice the tightness but you're right. Have adjusted. Thanks for the tip :)
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Re: Kameraltı Pazar

Postby wheels on Thu Jul 17, 2008 9:10 am

Nice photos Carla, they capture the moment well.
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Re: Kameraltı Pazar

Postby PiroStitch on Thu Jul 17, 2008 10:10 am

#2 is the winner now Carla :D
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Re: Kameraltı Pazar

Postby seeto.centric on Fri Jul 18, 2008 3:57 pm

lovely shots! im a big fan of candid streetwork hehe you've got some nice photos on your flickr also :)

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