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cold winter arvo

Postby the afro guy on Wed Jul 16, 2008 6:23 am

here's just a few i put together on one of those miserably cold but somehow sunny winter afternoons

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Re: cold winter arvo

Postby Bindii on Wed Jul 16, 2008 5:35 pm

The piano one is very good.. I also like the last but its a tad dark in the right hand corner.. :)
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Re: cold winter arvo

Postby wheels on Thu Jul 17, 2008 9:15 am

I like the scratched window but because it has straight lines you can tell that it is on a angle. I reckon if you straightened it up so that the window frame is parallel with the side of the photo it would look better.
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Re: cold winter arvo

Postby the afro guy on Thu Jul 17, 2008 3:29 pm

cheers for the comments guys. i need to get back to taking more photos again!
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Re: cold winter arvo

Postby surenj on Thu Jul 17, 2008 6:36 pm

I like the piano photo as well..
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Re: cold winter arvo

Postby colin_12 on Sat Jul 19, 2008 10:56 pm

Another nod for the piano.
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Re: cold winter arvo

Postby Alex on Sun Jul 20, 2008 5:31 pm

Love your use of DoF in the first one and the naturla light is great there.

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Re: cold winter arvo

Postby the afro guy on Mon Jul 21, 2008 3:39 am

Thanks Alex, the natural light was actually what spurred me into action that day. I was doing something completely different in that room when i noticed the light coming in through the window above the piano and thought it looked too nice to turn up the opportunity to capture it!
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