*EDIT 20-Jul-2008* - based on the feedback from the forum, I have rolled back my harsh PP to show more of a human factor as below. click for a larger image.
Thanks for taking a look
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Melb's Laneways
Here is my take on Melb's Laneways... I am looking for comments and critiques from the forum. Click on image for larger view
*EDIT 20-Jul-2008* - based on the feedback from the forum, I have rolled back my harsh PP to show more of a human factor as below. click for a larger image. Thanks for taking a look Last edited by makario on Sun Jul 20, 2008 12:49 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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Re: Melb's Laneways
Makario, I like it but wonder if it would hold more interest with someone or something in the foreground. Maybe a person in the foreground, or a lower angle to make the paving more of a feature? I would probably straighten the building just a fraction.
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Re: Melb's Laneways
didnt even notice the building being at an angle!!! sheesh after all that pp work, maybe I should turn on gridlines
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Re: Melb's Laneways
 with the addition of a human factor...it looks a bit deserted and lonely...
Re: Melb's Laneways
Mak, could you pull any more detail out of the shadows? There are people in there......
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Re: Melb's Laneways
I agree with Greg, kinda me feel 'absent and lonely' unless thats what you're going for? I think pulling some more detail from the shadows would help a great deal...
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