Gromit in full flight!

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Gromit in full flight!

Postby marc on Sat Aug 09, 2008 6:46 pm

A few today from our local dog park, of our 3 year old Mini-Schnauzer "Gromit".
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C & C most welcome

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Re: Gromit in full flight!

Postby Killakoala on Sat Aug 09, 2008 11:17 pm

[c&c]

I gotta say great shots, but grossly over-sharpened.

Such poise and grace from your subject. :) Great timing with your trigger finger too.

Pity about the sharpening.

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Re: Gromit in full flight!

Postby DaveB on Sun Aug 10, 2008 12:10 am

Oversharpened, but impressive nonetheless.
You missed the focus on the 3rd shot though...
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Re: Gromit in full flight!

Postby andy on Sun Aug 10, 2008 12:16 am

These are great!
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Re: Gromit in full flight!

Postby chrisk on Sun Aug 10, 2008 12:26 am

lmfao those first 2 shots are bloody pearlers mate !
i just about spat my coffee out over the laptop when i opened this thread. still laughin...lmfaooo

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Re: Gromit in full flight!

Postby ja_S_on on Sun Aug 10, 2008 12:41 am

Awesome photos!Gromit's expressions are priceless - especially in the second picture. It really looks like the wheel is about to get whats coming to it :P

I don't particularly mind the sharpening though - it definitely makes the subject 'pop'
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Re: Gromit in full flight!

Postby miikeboyle on Sun Aug 10, 2008 1:55 am

Great shots.
Grommit is really popping out from the background.

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Re: Gromit in full flight!

Postby marc on Sun Aug 10, 2008 8:31 am

Killakoala wrote:[c&c]

I gotta say great shots, but grossly over-sharpened.

Such poise and grace from your subject. :) Great timing with your trigger finger too.

Pity about the sharpening.

[/c&c]


Thanks for the comments guys.
I think I may have over sharpened on the second image, however the first and last (where I missed the AF on the face) are OK IMO?
With this type of BG, you need to make the image pop :wink:

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Re: Gromit in full flight!

Postby DaveB on Sun Aug 10, 2008 10:43 am

marc wrote:I think I may have over sharpened on the second image, however the first and last (where I missed the AF on the face) are OK IMO?

I'd say the 3rd one is definitely oversharpened: the foreground grass is just too "crunchy".
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Re: Gromit in full flight!

Postby marc on Sun Aug 10, 2008 3:01 pm

DaveB wrote:
marc wrote:I think I may have over sharpened on the second image, however the first and last (where I missed the AF on the face) are OK IMO?

I'd say the 3rd one is definitely oversharpened: the foreground grass is just too "crunchy".



Hi Dave
Surprisingly the 3rd one has had the least amount of USM. :shock:
Due to the fact that I had already missed AF on his face.

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Re: Gromit in full flight!

Postby ewm3 on Sun Aug 10, 2008 3:41 pm

The first is great; the 'sharpening' just adds to the impact.
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Re: Gromit in full flight!

Postby zafra52 on Sun Aug 10, 2008 6:49 pm

I tend to agree with the above. Great action shots of Gromit but at least in the second one the versharpenning makes him look like a cut out against the background.
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