Soldiers barracks at the Taj

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Soldiers barracks at the Taj

Postby whitey on Thu Sep 04, 2008 12:05 am

Just outside the soldiers barracks at the Taj Mahal. Slightly off centre and a bit of distortion, but I kinda like it C&C welcome as I hope to go back with more time.

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Re: Soldiers barracks at the Taj

Postby Glen on Thu Sep 04, 2008 9:59 am

Nice image, it almost seems like an optical illusion with so many open doorways
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Re: Soldiers barracks at the Taj

Postby PiroStitch on Thu Sep 04, 2008 11:29 am

Personally I'd crop out the edge doorway if it distorts that much - like the disappearing doorway. well captured.
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Re: Soldiers barracks at the Taj

Postby big pix on Thu Sep 04, 2008 7:29 pm

what a great capture.......... all that needs doing is a very large print for the wall
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Re: Soldiers barracks at the Taj

Postby kitchenwench on Thu Sep 04, 2008 7:43 pm

What a gorgeous capture - love love love the colour! Though, I do agree with PiroStitch about the cropping - a slight straighten and cropping of the right doorway and I think the effect would be even stronger (not that it's not great now :))
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Re: Soldiers barracks at the Taj

Postby surenj on Thu Sep 04, 2008 8:11 pm

Love it! I was there at the beginning of this year and didn't see this shot...
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Re: Soldiers barracks at the Taj

Postby whitey on Thu Sep 04, 2008 8:22 pm

surenj wrote:Love it! I was there at the beginning of this year and didn't see this shot...


Its just after the security check, only found it by chance. Ran in there for cover from a storm, turned around and thought wow.
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Re: Soldiers barracks at the Taj

Postby Merkyone on Thu Sep 04, 2008 8:56 pm

Looks fine the way it is to me.
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