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My early morning Part IIIAnd this is the last lot I think. Comments welcomed again.
I personally think this one is the weakest, couldn't make it POP in PP; This guy let us get very close and personal, it was almost like his was posing for us! Geoff
Special Moments Photography Nikon D700, 50mm 1.4, 85mm 1.4, 70-200 2.8VR, SB800 & some simple studio stuff.
Re: My early morning Part IIIReally like the first one Geoff, only thing I would have done different is to face the thongs the other way pointing into the photo, but that's being pedantic.
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Phillip **Nikon D7000**
Re: My early morning Part IIINumber one is fantastic
Re: My early morning Part III#1 - excellent although I would be inclined to crop the bottom out
#2 - No focal point of interest #3 - too much clutter would have been better to zoom in on the birdie #4 - read as per #2 Chris
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Re: My early morning Part IIIThanks for the feedback guys.
Chris - do you suggest cropping the thongs out completely? Geoff
Special Moments Photography Nikon D700, 50mm 1.4, 85mm 1.4, 70-200 2.8VR, SB800 & some simple studio stuff.
Re: My early morning Part III#1 is a ripper Geoff. I think you have 2 images in one here if i read Chris correctly. Pano cropping bottom edge without thongs and the current image which I favour
cheers marco
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Yes Chris
-------------------------------- I started my life with nothing and I’ve still got most of it left
Re: My early morning Part IIIThose thongs have an unbelievable amount of visual power in the first image! I can't stop trying to de-construct the composition and work out where that power/visual energy comes from. An image with a lesson.
Regards
Matt. K
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