Cold? Not when you're old!

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Cold? Not when you're old!

Postby Geoff on Sun Sep 21, 2008 11:05 am

It amazes me the number of the 'older' generation who swim almost all year round.
I asked this guy if I could take his photo this morning at the rock pool.
He kindly obliged.
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Re: Cold? Not when you're old!

Postby BullcreekBob on Sun Sep 21, 2008 2:54 pm

Geoff - this one very fine portrait.

The pose, lighting and treatment have all worked to produce this beautiful result.
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Re: Cold? Not when you're old!

Postby Matt. K on Sun Sep 21, 2008 3:07 pm

Nice image Geoff....but I suspect the colour version could be even better?
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Re: Cold? Not when you're old!

Postby sirhc55 on Sun Sep 21, 2008 3:11 pm

Are you kidding me Geoff - that guys only 25 :D Nut clenching always makes you look a lot older.

A fine capture indeed but I will echo Matt’s comment on colour.
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Re: Cold? Not when you're old!

Postby Geoff on Sun Sep 21, 2008 3:17 pm

Thanks guys, here's the colour version.
I'm going through a passion for B&W portraits at the moment I think;

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Re: Cold? Not when you're old!

Postby Matt. K on Sun Sep 21, 2008 3:24 pm

Hmmm. Now I'm not so sure. I like them both.
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Re: Cold? Not when you're old!

Postby stubbsy on Sun Sep 21, 2008 3:51 pm

Geoff I really like this image and prefer the B & W. For some reason in the colour one I read the Speedo writing on his swimmers and it distracts me, but I don't notice it on the B & W version. Hope that makes sense
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Re: Cold? Not when you're old!

Postby dawesy on Sun Sep 21, 2008 4:02 pm

I also think this is a great portrait. I prefer the B+W as well. I find the colour a little too blue and the B+W has a nice feel of times gone by when people appreciated things more, and didn't let something like the cold get in the way!
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Re: Cold? Not when you're old!

Postby Reschsmooth on Sun Sep 21, 2008 9:06 pm

I like the B&W version. I think the light enhances the skin tones in the B&W version
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Re: Cold? Not when you're old!

Postby surenj on Mon Sep 22, 2008 9:53 pm

Love the BW... Great portrait...
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