Experimentation in PP - V8SC pic

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Experimentation in PP - V8SC pic

Postby bwhinnen on Wed Oct 15, 2008 7:39 am

Whilst going through some old images for a printed portfolio I was trying to save an image to see if it was worth it (it wasn't). I decided to pull it into CS3 as a RAW (it was taken as a JPEG) as this allowed me to play with the settings through ACR. I came up with two distinctly different results and am not sure which processing I like best. I was going for the hand drawn and then water coloured / coloured pencil look without resorting to a filter, they are both de-saturated quite a bit, one slightly more than the other.

Sample 1. More contrast and edge definition on the darks makes a moody image.
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Sample 2. Less contrast, makes a more whimsical image.
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I'm almost wondering if something through the middle would achieve the look I want. I'm thinking this may make a nice style to print on canvas. Would really appreciate your opinions, does it work, or should I go back to bed and not get up for a week before touching Photoshop again :D

Thanks for looking ;)

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Re: Experimentation in PP - V8SC pic

Postby Greg B on Wed Oct 15, 2008 1:10 pm

Brett, I am not really a motor racing fan (although I will watch a bit on TV from time to time), so my comments should be discounted accordingly.

I don't think the desaturation works. Motor racing is loud, fast, in your face and colourful. The cars are (initially at least) beautifully finished
and brightly painted. Reduce the colours and - to me anyway - you lose an important aspect of the way it looks.

Otherwise, the shot looks pretty good to me!
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Re: Experimentation in PP - V8SC pic

Postby Big Red on Wed Oct 15, 2008 2:34 pm

i'd have to agree with Greg...
they need more colour not less IMHO
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Re: Experimentation in PP - V8SC pic

Postby bwhinnen on Wed Oct 15, 2008 2:55 pm

Hmm not quite what I was going for, but here is more saturation for a concept.

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What I was originally thinking was something similar to a b&w print I have, perhaps I should have taken the colour out and turned it into a B&W to get the effect I was aiming for...
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Re: Experimentation in PP - V8SC pic

Postby ATJ on Wed Oct 15, 2008 4:11 pm

Brett,

I prefer the 3rd image, although I think the colour needs to be toned back a tad.
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Re: Experimentation in PP - V8SC pic

Postby bwhinnen on Wed Oct 15, 2008 4:49 pm

ATJ wrote:Brett,

I prefer the 3rd image, although I think the colour needs to be toned back a tad.


I'm going extremes here Andrew, not trying to make it look like a normal shot, that bit is easy ;) But I'll tone it back a little when I get back on my laptop later this evening...
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Re: Experimentation in PP - V8SC pic

Postby Big Red on Wed Oct 15, 2008 5:50 pm

probably a bit much as the shadows look painted on .

picky lot aren't we :lol:
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Re: Experimentation in PP - V8SC pic

Postby mickeyjuice on Wed Oct 15, 2008 10:27 pm

Big Red wrote:picky lot aren't we :lol:

No doubt about that!

Having said that, I prefer #3 but think it's a bit much as well :-)
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Re: Experimentation in PP - V8SC pic

Postby bwhinnen on Fri Oct 17, 2008 6:42 am

Sorry been busy with other projects ;)

But finally got back to it last night.

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Re: Experimentation in PP - V8SC pic

Postby ATJ on Fri Oct 17, 2008 7:16 am

Brett,

I like the last one. :)
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Re: Experimentation in PP - V8SC pic

Postby mickeyjuice on Fri Oct 17, 2008 7:18 am

Yeah, love it. Guess I'm a traditionalist when it comes to some subjects :-)
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Re: Experimentation in PP - V8SC pic

Postby gstark on Fri Oct 17, 2008 8:03 am

If you changed the angle, so that the car/image appeared to face downhill (from right to left) would the car be traveling faster? :mrgreen:
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