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A few Flowers

Postby aim54x on Tue Nov 04, 2008 12:00 am

Just some more old shots

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Re: A few Flowers

Postby surenj on Sat Nov 08, 2008 9:04 pm

Love the lighting in the first one. The second is good but I am wanting to see more of the flower bud in the bottom.
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Re: A few Flowers

Postby The Scorpion Man on Sun Nov 09, 2008 1:54 pm

I like the second one, the first I would have moved in closer for, seems to me to be a little too much of nothing. I might have cloned out the dirty bits on the flower though..... :D
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Re: A few Flowers

Postby chrisk on Sun Nov 09, 2008 4:59 pm

nice sharp contrasty image in the first. nicely done.
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Re: A few Flowers

Postby aim54x on Sun Nov 09, 2008 9:22 pm

Thanks for the comments guys! These are essentially straight out of camera (sans frame and compression) and were shot with a borrowed 70-300mm VR with my long gone D40x (awww I miss that camera!!)
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Re: A few Flowers

Postby colin_12 on Mon Nov 10, 2008 8:22 pm

I like the first. Nice use of dof. Nice colour.
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Re: A few Flowers

Postby biggerry on Mon Nov 10, 2008 10:20 pm

I like the first. Nice use of dof.


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The image also leads the eye well too! nice one! :up:
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