Narrabeen Sunrise - Velvia 50

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Narrabeen Sunrise - Velvia 50

Postby Reschsmooth on Fri Nov 14, 2008 9:27 pm

A few weeks ago, the Bachelor (Geoff, as he was then) and I went to Narrabeen to take some sunrise photos. I mainly used the Bronnie shooting Velvia 50 (what a film!). I have finally had a couple scanned and here they are. (I know the first one has a crooked horizon). Apart from development and scanning, these are straight out of the camera.

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C&C would be appreciated on these ones.
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Re: Narrabeen Sunrise - Velvia 50

Postby MCWB on Fri Nov 14, 2008 9:46 pm

First one needs a bit more *pop* I think Patrick, more saturation at least. 2nd one is superb!
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Re: Narrabeen Sunrise - Velvia 50

Postby surenj on Fri Nov 14, 2008 10:08 pm

Nice images esp straight out of camera! I had a de-ja-vu seeing these... Have you posted these before?
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Re: Narrabeen Sunrise - Velvia 50

Postby Reschsmooth on Fri Nov 14, 2008 10:28 pm

surenj wrote: I had a de-ja-vu seeing these... Have you posted these before?


I posted some shots from the D200 shortly after I took them.
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Re: Narrabeen Sunrise - Velvia 50

Postby Pehpsi on Fri Nov 14, 2008 11:55 pm

Love the second, great stuff.
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