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Adidas, Microscopic edition

Postby surenj on Mon Nov 17, 2008 9:28 pm

Trying to make a photobook for a friend's baby, I was experimenting with different 'shoe' shots. Any ideas how to make this better lighting, composition or concept wise?

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Re: Adidas, Microscopic edition

Postby Glen on Mon Nov 17, 2008 11:07 pm

Like the image and concept. I might try a different background and see how that goes, would also be tempted to try a more in motion look, as if the shoes were walking toward you, maybe at a slight angle. No idea how either will come out. Nice idea for a friend
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Re: Adidas, Microscopic edition

Postby darklightphotography on Tue Nov 18, 2008 10:19 am

Composition wise, I would include the full reflection of the shoe, perhaps adjust the angle so the background goes all the way to the top. For the lighting, I think the front show should be the brightest.
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Re: Adidas, Microscopic edition

Postby Matt. K on Tue Nov 18, 2008 5:25 pm

I like the shot as is....the only thing I might alter is to pop a little light into the rear shoe. Nice work!
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