Fire in Wollongong

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Fire in Wollongong

Postby Kreapen on Thu Dec 04, 2008 6:49 pm

Was driving home last night and a fire broke out just down the road from the train station.
Let me know what you think.

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Re: Fire in Wollongong

Postby biggerry on Thu Dec 04, 2008 8:00 pm

3rd one is great, really nice angle and captures the moment well with the hint of, well lots of smoke! The only thing that could have made it spot on, imo, is the inclusion of the upper portion of the 'cherry' picker crane structure.

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Re: Fire in Wollongong

Postby Matt. K on Thu Dec 04, 2008 9:48 pm

Nice work! The first image tells a story and is the one that works best for me.
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